Chapter 1: Page 29

posted July 6th, 2011, 9:57 am


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July 6th, 2011, 10:02 am

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And there we go! End of Chapter 1! Like I said, I was completly unprepared for the battle with Gary. Puck was the only one who were stronger than lvl 5, but I was too afraid to use him against the Bulbasaur, because what if it knew vine whip? D:

Edna, Rattus and Regina worked together to take it down and ... well ... so in a way Rattus died to save Puck. :c

I got a little bit carried away with his character though. The next chapter will be a bit more fast paced, but it will take a little while before I start uploading it. I want to finish colouring it first, and tomorrow I'm going to visit some friends and family, but expect the next chapter in ... well ... two or three weeks? Not completly sure.

Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting so far! Like I said before, it makes me happy and motivates me to work a little more. I hope you enjoyed the first chapter and stay tuned for the next! :)

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July 6th, 2011, 10:21 am

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Keep up the good work :)

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July 6th, 2011, 10:36 am

TheProjectCore

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...........................

gary's a bitch.

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July 11th, 2011, 11:43 am

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That was intense. That's to bad about Rattus though.

Also, Bulbasaur don't learn Vine Whip until later. That one probably knew Leech Seed.

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July 14th, 2011, 6:39 am

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locoroco1: Yeah ... I learned about that a little late. But now I'll never forget it.

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October 11th, 2013, 11:07 pm

etta

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I've read tons of Nuzlockes, really great ones. This is the very first to easily make me cry.
Your comic is wonderful and you are a wonderful artist and so good at conveying emotion. Puck's reaction is so sad. They didn't like each other but Rattus still saved him... wowie.

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December 17th, 2013, 4:01 am

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@TheProjectCore: You just relised?

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September 21st, 2014, 4:29 am

Dah whut (Guest)

:o

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I have a bad feeling....

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September 28th, 2014, 11:28 am

Rosemary_Tea (Guest)

Happened to me...

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Im doing my own Nuzlocke playthrough and I just lost my first Pokemon (a Rattata) and I dont know how to simulate burying him

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December 31st, 2015, 9:09 pm

RogueOfTime

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Poor Rattus. Suspenseful and interesting story so far. I just started reading this comic today and I can't wait to read more.

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