Chapter 7: Page: 18

posted August 22nd, 2012, 9:46 am


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August 22nd, 2012, 9:46 am

Qlock

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And that's this weeks update! Much more stuff happening. But still don't know what to say. I'll spare you any rants about how things went in-game. It was fun to draw though, and I'm quite happy with the colours.

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August 22nd, 2012, 10:35 am

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that was a pretty sweet way to do all those on ship battles actually xD grindiiing. I'm really intersted how this run will evolve like will she ever be proven innocent and stuff, I like that Surge has doubts about her being an actual terrorist :3 and you're right, the coloring and especially the fire in these pages turned out amazing!

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August 22nd, 2012, 2:29 pm

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Howdy :)

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Can I just say, I love Adeela. It's awesome how you create characters that aren't generic pokemon trainers and they contribute to the plot without completely stealing the spotlight. It's pretty random to say since I've never commented on your comic before, but you do such a good job and it's really great to see a unique style. I especially love how you drew Vermillion City at the beginning of the chapter. It looked like the perfect seaside town (actually looked like one I visited recently in France!).
Sorry for spamming this one page with my whole view of the chapter so far, but I totally love it and I've honestly re-read this so many times, but I've never really been able to say how much I love it before.
But anyway, now you know. It's great and I love it. Please don't ever give up. :)

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August 22nd, 2012, 6:20 pm

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I will only say that my hate against Gary is becoming more and more visceral the more the comic advances.

These pages turned out awesome, and the panel where Cogito turned into a Nidoqueen was one of the most badass moments of the comic.

Your work is amazing. Keep at it. This is literally the best Pokémon comic I had the pleasure to read.

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August 24th, 2012, 5:48 pm

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I have so much pleasure reading this comic; I've read it for the 6th time today and it's still totally epic! The scene where Cogito evolved was bad-ass <3 Also Kato's dig in the ship was great thought of xD I really love your team =) Keep up the great work!!

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August 24th, 2012, 10:33 pm

RedJac

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*Sings Gary's Theme Song*

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May 1st, 2013, 4:47 pm

Guest

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Ok honestly? Why do I have this feeling like....I dunno, this sounds dumb when I say it out loud. But Like, why do I get this feeling that Lt. Surge is her dad? I mean what first planted the seed in my head was their identical hair color and eye color but, eh, doesn't mean they're related. What really got me thinking about this is the way Surge is behaving and showing sympathy towards her; almost like he doesn't want to believe that she is bad or something. So far he's the only character in this comic (besides Robin's pokemon) to not immediately think she was a menace or think there is some good in her. It makes me think like maybe he doesn't want to see his little girl going down this path or he can't believe that she already has. That's really what's making me think that right now. He's the only character to really care and try to stick up for her. I know you said you really like Surge, so maybe it's just the way you write him that makes him so noble but from the reader's perspective honestly why WOULD he care? It's very interesting, and just a theory, but it's probably incorrect.

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