Chapter 8: Page 23

posted January 14th, 2013, 10:31 am


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January 14th, 2013, 10:34 am

Qlock

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Weeell, finally! Dunno what to say, but thanks for your patience and here are some pages. Hope you all had a nice holiday. I sure had. :)

If anyone wonders, Dolph was caught in Rock Tunnel and Regina II on Route 9.

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January 14th, 2013, 12:14 pm

mapsal313

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Seems that waiting paid off! This comic is awsome!

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January 14th, 2013, 12:17 pm

Ryoko Son

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Happiness Fills My SOUL!!! ^0^

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January 14th, 2013, 2:29 pm

Complete Stranger

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Fifth panel is just like wooooow.

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January 14th, 2013, 5:32 pm

GoldenJoe

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It's great to have you back! Had me worried for Jojo there...I have no idea how you're going to make a Beedrill last all the way through Blue, but I hope you manage somehow. I loved the Voltorb shock too, haha!

That said, I want to offer a little critique on the art. I think your old style with the eyes looked much better. Robin's "Mario" eyes are too detailed to fit the model, and result in a very dilated look. I don't know if it was intentional, but Puck's pupils also appeared very dilated in the last batch of comics, which makes him look more cute than is befitting of his personality.

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January 14th, 2013, 8:57 pm

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I might have to agree with Joe about thee eyes. It's cool seeing you try out different styles and I hope you keep doing that, but these eyes just don't seem to fit. Than again it's not very often we see Robin so happy so maybe these are just her happy eyes.

Anyway I like Dolph, he seems a little silly and way strong. He'll be fun to have around.

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January 14th, 2013, 10:15 pm

Robin Goodfellow (Guest)

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MORE HARD LIFE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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January 14th, 2013, 11:04 pm

DragonTrainer

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Am I the only one that kinda likes the new eyes for the mood of the current episode?

Also at the fifth panel of this page I think I spit out a lung.

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January 15th, 2013, 8:08 am

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@Joe and Miles: As much as I appreciate constructive criticism, I'm not sure I agree with this. It's not so much about trying out different "styles" as just me trying not to be lazy. I've been trying to put more detail into the art, though honestly, I WAS being lazy when I drew these last pages(especially this last page). Anyway, I see an advantage in using pupils as they can be used to express emotion (and I DO love to draw expressfull eyes), so I'm afraid the pupils will stay. I have already drawn about 100 more pages with them, so hopefully it will look better as the art, not just the eyes, evolves.

But still, thanks for taking your time with analyzing what feels "off". I will think of it when I draw the next few pages, and we'll see what happens. :)

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January 15th, 2013, 6:24 pm

Xavier the Fox

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I'm prepping myself for massive feels that are on the horizon.

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January 16th, 2013, 10:08 pm

juan garcia (Guest)

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dam it !Can this comic go on ,I mean that ,I need to go to another page.

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January 18th, 2013, 11:22 am

Sail-to-Me

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I, for one, absolutely love the eyes. They give Robin a more youthful look and I think it's good since this chapter she seems to have become a little more perky and adventurous. I love that your art has become more detailed.
Good luck with the run! :)

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