Chapter 9: Page 9

posted February 18th, 2013, 1:30 pm


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February 18th, 2013, 1:30 pm

Qlock

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Aaaaand, right into the action. Sorta. Now, I cut out Rock Tunnel completely because NOTHING happened in there except for catching Dolph and evolving Bimm, so I didn't feel inspired to come up with anything about it. I also sorta saved Pokémon Tower for later and walked straight to Celadon. And of course Erika was no match for Bimm (Aerial Ace is my favourite flying move).

I am also feeling ambitious so I'm going to aim for an update every SECOND week. Not sure if I'll be able to keep that up, but I'm gonna try. if there's no update for any week, it's probably just because I had too much schoolwork or too much mess in my life. And again, thank you so much for the feedback!

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March 22nd, 2013, 3:06 pm

Qlock

Old news but, well ...

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I know it has been a month! I'm not proud of it at all, but there have been problems. I just don't know how many people who actually check the 'news-section' here, I know I barely do it, but I did put an explanation there. I am sorry, but no update yet for a while ... I'll get my new computer soon, but life has been extra messy recently. Thank you for your patience again, and I'm so sorry!

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February 18th, 2013, 1:52 pm

XXUD1Xx6920

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lol first panel
and dont wrry bout it bro
we'll wait
uv'e already updated plenty
and please dont tell me they killed her pokemons ;w;

EDIT

Also, comment virginity

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February 18th, 2013, 2:01 pm

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Awesome! It got me excited to see that this updated! It's become one of my favorite Nuzlocke comics. The art is amazing. And the story is also Amazing.

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February 18th, 2013, 2:02 pm

Zelkova

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I been waiting for an update just so I can tell you that you have +1 fav now. Also love the creepypasta-like art style and how you not going the normal "beat all 8 gyms and become champion" route.

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February 18th, 2013, 3:05 pm

JustSmall (Guest)

So excited!

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My first update that I experience right after the release, feels "fresh" ;)

Really looking forward to Hoenn (favourite region) if you actually send our heroes there.

Great comics again, makes me excited for the next batch!

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February 18th, 2013, 3:16 pm

Zombeige

Holy crap.

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It is so amazing how much your style has changed from when you began the series to now. Everything is smoother and your lines more fluid, your painting has progressed and looks stunning, it's so incredible to see how much you've grown as an artist. You went from good to amazing. I love this web comic, it is literally the only thing I look forward to anymore. I really hope you keep doing this if you love it because dayum, I love it too.

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February 18th, 2013, 3:39 pm

redleaveshavefallen

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Should have gotten a badge, man.

;u; Lovely colors in this town, it is so nice!

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February 18th, 2013, 3:47 pm

Miles Hikari

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This town always feels weird to me.

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February 18th, 2013, 6:24 pm

DragonTrainer

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Excellent work. I cant wait for more.
Keep up the good job. =D

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February 18th, 2013, 8:51 pm

I Love You! (Guest)

I Love You!

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I Love You!

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February 18th, 2013, 9:07 pm

ArobotnamedColin (Guest)

Perfect

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This entire series is amazing

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February 18th, 2013, 10:21 pm

UltraNOVA

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I'm so impressed with how this comic evolved. There's just so much personality and character development.
Still one of my favorite nuzlocke comics ever and I look forward to what's next!

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February 19th, 2013, 3:53 pm

melaredblu

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I like how you draw Erika. You just keep getting better at drawing people as you go.

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February 19th, 2013, 10:51 pm

Spiderlight

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"Eating sticks", ha! XD What a delightfully worded threat!

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February 20th, 2013, 2:30 pm

mapsal313

This just gets better and better!

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Seriously, this comic is getting more awsome page after page! And it has the perfect mix of humor, adventure and drama! I just love this!

...now I'm gonna sit back and wait patiently till the next update... but don't rush it! Better take your time and keep doing awsome job rather than rush it make something not as good...

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February 20th, 2013, 2:41 pm

Guest

Love

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Just read the whole thing. Im in love with this!! Cant wait for the next update.

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February 21st, 2013, 2:17 pm

Guest (Guest)

Love

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You do a great job with these. Please, whatever you do, don't stop making them. They really make me feel like a kid again.

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February 21st, 2013, 8:07 pm

All_That_Chaz

You've got another fan

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Read the whole series. I'm in love with the characters you've created and the atmosphere you create with the coloring style is incredible. It helps that Sandslash is my favorite pokemon :3

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February 21st, 2013, 8:20 pm

Ney (Guest)

AWESOMENESS

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Please, please keep doing these, I read all chapters in a single day and this has become my favorite comic. I love it <3

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February 22nd, 2013, 11:39 am

MisterYada (Guest)

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I just have to say, I stayed up all night reading this from start to finish. I'll be honest, it was rough going at first. The initial artistic style could be much easier on the eyes, but I've learned to not let such things deter me. I got a few laughs out of some of the typical frustrations of playing Pokemon since gen 1 (Seriously, that kid has a problem with shorts, and just... fuck Gary.), but around Cerulean City, you managed to take it from "kid haphazardly makes it from Pallet Town to fuck-knows-where" and turn it into an enthralling story of its own direction. I don't know if it was your writing, or the fact that the sun was rising around that time, but I started to feel emotions at some of this stuff, especially the arc involving Lt. Surge. It's given me some fuel to write more myself. And my earlier complaint of the art style? Totally disappeared at the start of the eighth chapter, and never came back. Good work, and hope to see more.

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February 22nd, 2013, 2:33 pm

Guest

Your comic is amazing

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Seriously, what an inspiration. What beautiful work. Thank you for creating something so amazing for me to share with my friends.

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February 22nd, 2013, 7:37 pm

u_queen

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God I read this in two days! I love your art and your coloring, but more else I love the story. Is crude, even so it leaves a trace of hope that the main characters will find hapiness.

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February 23rd, 2013, 11:30 am

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If anyone with a paypal account is reading this please listen. Go to Itoshii's Crazy Nuzlocke Adventures a pokemon sapphire nuzlocke and read the latest page. I can't do much more about the situation because i'm only 12.

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February 24th, 2013, 9:32 am

Guest

Awesome Comic

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This comic is so good! Keep up the great work!

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February 26th, 2013, 7:59 pm

MasterCheif999 (Guest)

Too good for words!

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Truly an amazing comic! Great job!

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March 1st, 2013, 12:02 pm

Gocks (Guest)

Tropical?

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I never thought of Fushia as tropical, I'm excited to see your take on the environment!

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March 2nd, 2013, 10:51 pm

godmoderncommander

@QLOCK

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...I got to say, this is an interesting comic. I thought I wasn't going to like the comic because of the artwork but after reading a few pages, I found out it fits nicely with the story and grown to likw it. Not to mention you show a Pokemon comic where the main character is a good guy (though most of her actions are not exactly heroic) and yet is hunted down as a criminal. I have to say it: You got yourself another fan.

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March 11th, 2013, 6:17 am

Sakuka (Guest)

WOAH

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I discovered this comic today at work and, well. I read the entire thing and can't wait for more. Beautiful artwork, great story. ALL MY FEELS

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March 12th, 2013, 9:15 pm

mmmm (Guest)

good work

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Keep it up!

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March 14th, 2013, 1:32 pm

Djin (Guest)

Great job!

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Keep it up!

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March 15th, 2013, 3:24 am

Guest

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Beautiful art! I've seen a lot of Nuzlocke comics but this is my favorite.

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March 16th, 2013, 6:12 am

Guest

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Your art is amazing. At first I thought it looked childish, but then it grew - a lot like the trainer and it's pokemon. There are some scenes that are really well drawn. I wasn't so sure about pokemon talking, but their characters are great and the way they interact with each other is very entertaining. Thank you for sharing this, and please make more!

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March 20th, 2013, 1:39 pm

Aplatypus (Guest)

I love this!

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Its been a month girl! I need my fix!!!

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March 21st, 2013, 8:06 pm

dangerface45 (Guest)

incredible

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Amazing work! I love the characters and the idea is genius! Not to mention it's beautiful to look at! Great job and please keep it up!

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March 22nd, 2013, 11:54 pm

djlucamas (Guest)

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@Qlock: Take your time, as we all love your work. Hope life cleans itself up for you =].

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March 27th, 2013, 2:22 am

Phantom (Guest)

Love the Comic

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Just wanted to say that I found your work and I love it. While the material is a bit dark at times (at least for my tastes), I really enjoy what you did with the plot and the artwork is spectacular. Please keep it up, as I'm sure we're all dying to know where the story goes.

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March 27th, 2013, 3:48 am

TheRichestMedina (Guest)

Fantastic.

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I came across your comic via a link from REDDIT and now I am hooked.

Seriously, high five to you QLOCK. I would pay to have some of your art framed because I love the characters you've developed.

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March 27th, 2013, 4:14 am

Acxsoup (Guest)

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Well that took me at least an hour or more to read it all! Unfortunately I have to wait now! =( The story and art are great! Keep up the great work :D

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March 27th, 2013, 5:50 am

Bainshie (Guest)

Just....

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Someone linked this in reddit and...

Holy shit. There really isn't words to describe this. The story telling can get a little jumpy at times, and occasionally things get brushed over, but overall this entire comic is just pure... gold.

Also, I'm calling a plot twist right now:

At the end it turns out that killing pokemon isn't the normal thing to do, which is why everyone's always pissed off with him (And why all his pokemon 'murders' keep getting mentioned).

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March 27th, 2013, 9:01 am

Guest

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This is fantastic. Read it all in one sitting, the art improves immensely and the characters have real depth. Makes me want to try Nuzlocke

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March 27th, 2013, 11:18 am

Guest

Inspiring

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I can say I have never been this happy to go on a Pokemon nostalgia trip. What you have done in this series is just amazing. The artwork is great, the character development is there, the pacing. I tip my hat to you mademoiselle.

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March 27th, 2013, 12:59 pm

Blizzardbear (Guest)

Awesome

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Just read all 9 chapters during a study break. This is so cool!

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March 27th, 2013, 2:10 pm

Me (Guest)

Awesome

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This is great! Loving the mature pokemon theme! Keep it up!

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March 27th, 2013, 3:11 pm

Heavy (Guest)

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@Qlock: This shit is GOOD. Keep up the good work!

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March 27th, 2013, 5:53 pm

Guest

Nice!

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Very nice work!

Congratulations, great comic!

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March 27th, 2013, 8:36 pm

ribzy (Guest)

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This is absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!

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March 27th, 2013, 10:30 pm

Griffith (Guest)

I absolutely love this comic.

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Please do more! Its so amazing how you really capture the emotion of all the Pokemon.

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March 28th, 2013, 5:53 am

guardianoftheabyss (Guest)

AWESOME!

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This was an absolutely amazing read. Any change of getting the hole comic in an .cbr file, or .rar?

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March 28th, 2013, 12:26 pm

tawken (Guest)

GRATZ

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Man, i got here from reddit, and congratulations, you should do this comic for living

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March 29th, 2013, 1:42 am

StoryOfNex (Guest)

Amazing.

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I love this comic it is truly amazing. Take your time updating, just don't take too long. ;)

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March 30th, 2013, 4:23 am

a fan (Guest)

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dude i just read all this today. gotta say, this is amazing!

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April 1st, 2013, 12:04 am

Akren (Guest)

wow

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I just read through all of this in one sitting on a suggestion from a reddit post.

My goodness this is beautiful and horrifying at the same time. It never crossed my mind about pokemon killing others so the first death was so shocking.

I hope you get a new computer soon because I really want to see more of this. Keep doing what you're doing because its awesome!

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April 1st, 2013, 2:34 pm

Hetx (Guest)

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It's the next chapter coming up soon?

Sorry if i misspelled something english isn't my first language

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April 3rd, 2013, 8:08 pm

SickDudComics

Gah! :D

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I've read every page of this. My favorite comic on SmackJeeves! I don't care how long it takes, just keep it up. :)

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April 4th, 2013, 6:15 pm

hevendor

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Almost everything which is fantastic about this comic has been said. Even the framing and pacing of panels is genius. It has more vivid, embracing atmosphere than most animated cartoons.

Please, never change the way your draw and color this comic. Because of the watercolors, with their constantly and smoothly varying lights and darks, it's the only comic I can read online without getting eye pain. Truly a blessing for the Nuzlocke tradition.

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April 5th, 2013, 12:24 pm

beathelas (Guest)

Awesome!

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A friend linked this to me last night, by page 10 I was hooked!
At first glance the art was.. not the same as the normal manga and stuff I read, but aftr I got used to it, it's actually really good! the colours are wonderful and the figures are well proportioned and expressive.
What really hooked me though was the humour! it's really funny, and by the time they get to lt surge, it gets really dramatic too.
I just wish it was already finished so I didn't have to wait for more updates ;D

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April 21st, 2013, 7:51 pm

dalek_cyber (Guest)

it's a hard life

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@Qlock: So... is this dead? please say no...

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April 22nd, 2013, 1:57 pm

Qlock

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@dalek_cyber: No, I updated it 9 days ago.

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