Chapter 9: Page: 89

posted December 29th, 2013, 4:45 pm


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December 29th, 2013, 4:46 pm

Qlock

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did you remember that Eevee? Because I didn't. He was supposed to be seen watching the fight but I completly forgot about it as I was drawing it ... that's what I get for not writing scripts

Also, I have decided to create a very loose schedule for myself. Update at least once a month, probably won't be more than once very often though.

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December 29th, 2013, 4:58 pm

Qlock

Some replies ...

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@999134 (GUEST): I do read most comments (helps to motivate me sometimes), but I am bound to miss some of them.

@PLICHTA10: That is a pretty bad/good joke, pretty much what I would love to make. But since you just made it, I dunno if I could pull it off and feel good about it. Anyways, glad you like the little dysfunctional characters (that's how I like to write them).

@1123 (GUEST): if I had time I would make nuzlockes of all the games. but time is a rare thing and my goal is to be able to draw as much a spossible of this nuzlocke before life forces me to quit ...

@NATHAN (GUEST): Sorry. No merch.

@ANON (GUEST): I never noticed but yes! They do look like tardises!

@SOMEKJU (GUEST): Some personalities (mostly the early ones) were inspired (Puck had a docile nature in the game), but some were ... not so much (Cogito was modest in the game).

@TRACKY (GUEST): That was one long comment! THANKS! I agree wityh what you say about Bimm and Swann too, I had trouble writing them into the thing ... always hard to juggle 7 main characters at the same time! xD ... .. *cough*so in the next chapter both Bimm and Swann are getting a lot more screentime*cough*

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December 29th, 2013, 4:57 pm

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Eevee reminds me of why sometimes I'm really glad dogs can't talk, because if they could, I'm sure they'd be exactly like this lol.

Still some very nice pages, and so much drama and sadness, I almost cried in parts :c

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December 29th, 2013, 6:02 pm

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Casually perusing my favorites tab, when suddenly... ITS A HARD LIFE HAS UPDATED! YEEEES!

I was really loving that Eevee, but now he's kind of annoying, and not in an endearing way like innocent Puck... I hope he's not going to be a fanboy the entire time... but I gotta admit, I love innocent characters. I forgot the Sandshrew's name and I forgot which pages his name is mentioned...but I love his sort of sweetness he has. I love seeing pokemon who aren't all about fighting- seeing sweet sides is totally fun for me. It seems puck, Sir sandshrew, and Zager all have innocent-type personalities in different ways. Puck is probably trained to be docile and therefore has a loving personality, Sir Sandshrew seems to be very soft-centered, and now Zager seems to WANT to be an angry fighter-type pokemon, but his spoiled naive nature prevents him from being able to take strong hits. I love this combination, the characters really work well. This just keeps getting better each update...

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December 29th, 2013, 9:45 pm

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Even when your team wins without a single death, you still manage to make it heartbreaking. You really are something when it comes to writing drama. The way you used mood lighting and colors on these pages is especially great. As far as the story goes, I like how everyone sort of makes a good point about what happened. Of course they wouldn't have gotten in this mess is Cogito hadn't run off, but her reasons for what she does are very understandable. I admire how well Puck is handling the situation, too. He's gone a long way from when we first saw him.

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December 29th, 2013, 11:40 pm

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Oh my god, you have no idea how happy I am when this updates. The drama of it all makes it so enjoyable and even though you update once a month, at least you're putting in an honest effort and the waiting just makes the update even more exciting lol. Thank you soooo much for this comic and for not giving up on it.

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December 30th, 2013, 2:30 am

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That eevee deserved to be so hyped up

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December 30th, 2013, 9:35 am

StrangerThanYou

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NOOOOOOOOOOO. Shush those wings will grow back all you need is some magic honey and...and.. :C The Eevee's cute, who wouldn't be excited about being on the run with a bunch of wanted criminals? Drastic character development can be seen from Puck considering how he was in the beginning to now.

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December 30th, 2013, 11:59 pm

Sularis (Guest)

Aww

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I really feel for Jojjo.. She was my fave in this run.. And I hope that the Eevee tones down a little.

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December 31st, 2013, 2:53 am

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At the beginning, the angst.
At the end, the laughs.

That eevee looks like he's going to be very annoying unless he learns to tone his own attitude down.

Also I must say I'm happy to see that somebody told Cogito what we wanted to tell her sometime. And that she had opportunity to say something back.

Thanks for this last 2013 update. Like always, I'll be pending for any future update. :D

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December 31st, 2013, 7:35 am

Yep (Guest)

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Nice Update, u'r fic is awesome and get better everytime u update it!.

Just a prediction: Jojo will die with a earthquake or another ground move, right? That explain the lack of wings for now on.

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December 31st, 2013, 1:50 pm

Stellariia (Guest)

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Am I the only one who noticed that Puck quoted Rattus?

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December 31st, 2013, 2:42 pm

DragonTrainer

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No, I did it too, and it was a nice touch.

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December 31st, 2013, 5:39 pm

hellfire14

HAPPY NEW YEAR GUYS! :D

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Hope all that you've wanted to do has been done.
Here's to our future.
Cheers. :3

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December 31st, 2013, 9:09 pm

Mudo (Guest)

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I check this tab almost every day. It's a rare day when I see an update here, but when I do, that feeling is just awesome. What a story.

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January 1st, 2014, 3:41 am

Gryphon (Guest)

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I don't mind the irregular updates...this comic is just so good I'd wait pretty much forever as long as you never completely stopped.

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January 1st, 2014, 1:58 pm

Pyrophoricity

Awesome

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just read all of it in one go... just awesome and breathtaking

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January 1st, 2014, 2:18 pm

MeRyEh (Guest)

Love-Hate Relationship

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You are a phenomenally talented artist and story teller and I've truly invested and fallen in love with all the characters.

At the same time I hate the fact that I have to wait for the sporadic updates!!!

But I suppose art cannot be forced. Plus each update is a nice surprise!

I'm about 6 badges deep in my run and this comic has really made "my feels" more sensitive to this play through.

Keep em coming!!!

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January 2nd, 2014, 6:57 am

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Been a while since I last commented, but that doesn't mean I wasn't following this. I just was reading through my phone and it wouldn't let me log in and comment.

So I have to say, that was an epicly illustrated battle, and Jojjo was just badass.

Also, I really like the post-battle plot development.


Keep up the amazing job!

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January 2nd, 2014, 7:53 pm

Ed (Guest)

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I saw a bellsprout using flash for light. But didnt her bellsprout evolve?

error?

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January 2nd, 2014, 8:31 pm

K (Guest)

No

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@Ed: She caught a... "cousin"? I think it was, of her first bellsprout, which she used for HM's, so she has the one in her party, which evolved, and the one we saw using flash.

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January 4th, 2014, 11:41 am

hey bro (Guest)

rss feed

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Any way I can get this comic in my feedly? I tried plugging the url into the add content feed and it didn't find an rss feed. I would rather not sign up for an account with smackjeeves.com

Edit: I do really like this though.

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January 4th, 2014, 7:51 pm

bat (Guest)

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woo i just caught up finally. this is a great comic...

So is Jojjo going to be sent to the PC box? So when you were really playing the game, you just dumped your loyal beloved Beedrill for an Eevee? :p
or maybe she'll die? i dunno...

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January 4th, 2014, 9:28 pm

Hafting (Guest)

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@Tijopi11: The sandshrew's name is kato. Its said at the beginning of the 4th chapter.

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January 5th, 2014, 4:17 pm

somekju (Guest)

NOoooOO

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NONONONONO JOJJoO :-;
oh wow, that...was really moving. ah, that sacrifice. i'm curious as to what her nature was originally supposed to be...that friendship with sandslash is my favorite part of the series ;_;

and poor zager, heh. though if i were a showpet for a pushy lady like that i guess i'd be a bit unhinged too X)

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January 5th, 2014, 5:32 pm

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I wonder if Zager will evolve. I really hope so, the team would benefit from a fire or electric type. Although... when I think about it, flying can take out all types fire is effective against, save for steel. And grass can take water, so in that regards there isn't a huge demand for an electric type... still. I really want to see that Eevee evolved. And wisened up a bit.
This is I think my favourite Pokemon Nuzlocke comic so far. Your story, character development, and art are all quite strong, obvious in what everything is really spin off of story wise, but still fresh and unique. A much darker take on the games storyline, and the pokemon world in general. I love your characters. I hope you never stop, not until you've reached the end! Best of luck!

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January 7th, 2014, 3:16 pm

lol i dunno ;3 (Guest)

REFERENCE

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"He's young. he will learn"
REFERENCE TO CHAP 1, PAGE 13!! :0

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January 7th, 2014, 5:25 pm

Korny (Guest)

love it

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plz plz plz Yesterday my friend sent this page to me... and I am SO addicted to your story! It's so funny and moving... ._. I love it...

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January 9th, 2014, 7:02 pm

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Heh...nice callback to Rattus.

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January 17th, 2015, 10:23 am

Destroyaa (Guest)

He will learn

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When I read this, I thought of Sweeney Todd "you are young...life has been kind to you..you will learn.."

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August 14th, 2017, 12:15 am

Guest

SHIT JUST REALIZED

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DUDE RATTUS SAID THE SAME THING, RIGHT? TO PUCK? BEFORE HE DIED?

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April 14th, 2018, 4:39 pm

Guest

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@Guest: yep

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