Chapter 11: Page 48

posted March 4th, 2015, 3:58 pm


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March 4th, 2015, 4:02 pm

Qlock

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And the battle finally ends. At the same time as this comic reaches it's 500th page. Only fitting really. (Also that's a shitload of pages I can't believe I'm still doing this). Anyway. Long story short - I let Bimm spam Leer for a bit until she got the shit kicked out of her - Kato could finally do decent damage quick enough and had the best defenses to tank some hits ... until - critical hit!! For everyone who wonder why I didn't run from this battle: I have no idea. Maybe I forgot that I could run from this battle. But. At the very end - when the Snorlax was resorting to STRUGGLE I figured I might was well catch it ... so I did.

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March 4th, 2015, 4:03 pm

FunAwesome

Well,

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That was depressing.

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March 20th, 2015, 12:10 am

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

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@FunAwesome: Yes it was. it most certainly was. Swann is dead, Puck, Bimm, and Kato might be dead, and I don't know about Jojo and Cogito....

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March 4th, 2015, 4:46 pm

Avion (Guest)

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Darn the suspense! I really hope everyone survives (we all hope for a perfect world, don't we?).
On another note, it's going to be pretty awkward having the Snorlax in question on the team he severely wounded.

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March 22nd, 2015, 8:19 pm

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

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@Avion: I really can't stand waiting for this much longer. Please tell us who died and who survived!

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March 25th, 2015, 5:34 pm

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

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@NuzlockeWriter: I'm dying waiting for this.

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April 5th, 2015, 3:05 pm

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

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@NuzlockeWriter: But no pressure, bruh. I know these things are hard to make.

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March 4th, 2015, 5:12 pm

Cureal

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Nope nope nope this is just a whole lotta nope.

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March 11th, 2015, 1:56 pm

Potato_San (Guest)

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@Cureal: *Nope intensifies*

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March 4th, 2015, 5:50 pm

The_mad_one

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Well damn.

This is awkard.

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March 4th, 2015, 5:56 pm

Normal Reader Dude

Holy Smokes!

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Congrats on achieving 500 comics! I don't think there are very many nuzlockers with as much dedication as you. Then again, I only read nuzlocke comics on this site, so who knows.

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(please don't die)x50

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March 4th, 2015, 6:19 pm

Magpyro (Guest)

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Oh god this is killing me. Is there any chance we can at least get a hint as to who lived or died before the next update?

Congratulations on the 500 page milestone, by the way! This is hands-down the best Nuzlocke comic I've ever seen (and I've seen many) and I hope it can keep going strong until the end.

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March 4th, 2015, 6:25 pm

MRZ

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Aaaaaaedrftgyhu
I love this comic so much
By far my favorite comic on this site!

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March 4th, 2015, 7:15 pm

Hearts Degrassy

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Wait, Pluto is a police officer...without a trainer? I mean I know he was working at an office thing/toll area on his own but Id have thought pokemon couldnt like..be on a payroll on their own lol

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March 4th, 2015, 7:26 pm

DeathDragon (Guest)

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YES!!

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March 4th, 2015, 7:26 pm

Razor (Guest)

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Kato! Aww, sweet baby! Noooooo!

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March 4th, 2015, 7:49 pm

Sir Kel

Was it Worth It? The Answer is Yes!

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Congratulations! Pratically you whole team died, but at least you have the most OP Snorlax.

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March 4th, 2015, 8:41 pm

DragonTrainer

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Oh god, now I can't wait for the next update ;-;

Amazing job with keeping the suspense. And congrats for the 500 pages! :D

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March 4th, 2015, 11:12 pm

ThatOneSpriter

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Congratulations on 500 Comics its been wonderful reading your experience :D

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March 4th, 2015, 11:52 pm

The Orange Cow

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Grats on 500!

Please celebrate this momentous occasion by not letting a tragedy happen!

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March 5th, 2015, 1:32 am

DaWubber (Guest)

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Is there anyone left after this massacre!?

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March 5th, 2015, 1:48 am

DragonTrainer

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@DaWubber: Pluto.

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April 15th, 2015, 10:11 am

Whiskerbro (Guest)

Obviously Yes

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@DaWubber: Some of the team is obviously still alive. How would Robin catch Pluto if all of her pokemon were dead? I think Cogito and Puck are still alive, but I'm not sure about anyone else...

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May 3rd, 2015, 5:34 pm

anonymous (Guest)

Who was left after this massacre

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@DaWubber: Well, there's pluto!

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March 5th, 2015, 1:55 am

Zelkova

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Leer and such other move are kinda useless in a standard run but in a Nuzlocke I keep them for this exact reason. Moves that buff yourself is useless are you should be attacking but moves that debuff the opponent could potentially help out the rest of your team.

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March 5th, 2015, 1:57 am

Kieve (Guest)

Kato?

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No... please no. Not the Sandslash. It can't end like this, not for Kato... T_T

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March 10th, 2015, 9:10 pm

Guest

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@Kieve: Kato probably lives... How else would she catch it?

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March 5th, 2015, 3:05 am

SouLIke (Guest)

Wow

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Again. You leave off on two major cliff hangers in a row, C'mon man that's cruel ;_;. Your like the second Alfred Hitchcock with all of this suspense. Anyway, I hope the team is OK, I just don't want Jojjo to die, shes a really great character. She doesn't have to fight, I would be happy with her just being alive with the team. LET HER LIVE!!

Congrats on your 500th page. I know you've heard this many times already but your work is amazing. Keep it up my friend.

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March 5th, 2015, 6:12 am

Pedro (Guest)

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For Arceus's sake, please tell Kato survived. Actually, please tell everyone survived!!

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March 5th, 2015, 8:24 am

Umbrardor (Guest)

Welcome

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Welcome to the family, murderer.

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March 5th, 2015, 10:14 am

Freezia (Guest)

What

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Why?? What happened? Kato did not die, did he? D:
Please - he mustn't have died ;_;

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March 5th, 2015, 10:18 am

The seaker (Guest)

There is hope

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I yhink almost all f the team survive. I read the comic and each pokemon who died gave final words, so only one died, the rest fainted....... I guess

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April 1st, 2015, 7:41 pm

noah (Guest)

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@The seaker: as a nuzlocker the point of one is that they can attach you with pokemon My squirtle blackbeard will never be forgotten hold up i have to cry

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March 5th, 2015, 10:23 am

kiroma0

The point of Nuzlocke

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Is that when a Pokemon faint, he dies. You missed the point.

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March 6th, 2015, 5:07 am

Guest

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@kiroma0: I read all of the pokemon fainting in-comic as them being switched out in-game. Then they get shoved back into the fight after a bit of downtime. Otherwise it's just them all standing around waiting for their turn.

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March 11th, 2015, 7:40 am

kiroma0

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@Guest: http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Nuzlocke_Challenge
"Any Pokemon that faints is considered dead, and must be released."

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March 5th, 2015, 12:17 pm

Pyrophoricity

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Congartulation for the 500th page !
thanks for that amazing story

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March 5th, 2015, 5:36 pm

Guest

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noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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March 5th, 2015, 5:36 pm

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kato

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March 5th, 2015, 8:09 pm

GRG (Guest)

wow

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Pretty sure either Kato or Bimm died. The others seem safe.

Also, I'd recommend giving Dolph and Regina 2 some more time in the comic. It doesn't have to be a lot, but I can't even remember seeing Dolph outside of the time you caught him.

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May 16th, 2015, 6:08 pm

Terbgug (Guest)

Swann

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@GRG: I'm pretty sure that Swann is dead.

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March 5th, 2015, 11:44 pm

Guest

This comic gives me sads

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Everyone... Everyone I've ever loved is dead aren't they?

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March 6th, 2015, 5:10 am

Guest

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@Qlock: Please, for the love of all that is terrible in this world... please be quicker with the releases. This is by far the best thing I've read in years and I'm unbelievably impatient while waiting on your releases.

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March 6th, 2015, 3:15 pm

Mjoern (Guest)

body count

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I think only the victreebel and the bug died maybe even just the victreebel
Which I think is abhorrant but well

anyway gratz for the Big 500

now I just wonder how you'll make the Snorlax accept being a criminal.

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March 6th, 2015, 5:10 pm

Gronklespronkle (Guest)

Wow.

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Stumbled across this comic after reading the original nuzlocke over the past week, read this one over the last 2 days. Just brilliant.I read somewhere in earlier comments that you're from Wales? Well from a fellow Welshman keep it up!

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March 7th, 2015, 4:43 am

Urist (Guest)

ಠ_ಠ

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::nope intensifies::

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March 7th, 2015, 4:37 pm

Fracastador (Guest)

The Best Nuzlock

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I'm not sure who is still alive at this point, but this is the best Nuzlocke I have seen out of the numerous I have read, due to the
1) Quality of the Art (Definitely in the top 10 at least)
2) Creativity of the Plot (Definitely in the top 5 at least)
3) Characterization (Definitely in the top 3)
4) Commitment. Nobody with a nuzlocke comic even close to this level of quality has gotten anywhere near this length into a story. Here is where you rank an indisputable #1 in my book.

The only other nuzlocke I've seen of close to this overall caliber is Burning Bridges, and you left that one in the dust with commitment.

My opinion matters little, but I think you're awesome.

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March 8th, 2015, 12:50 pm

Ashrer (Guest)

Update times?

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Someone please tell me when updates are?!?!?

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March 8th, 2015, 10:56 pm

Urist (Guest)

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@Ashrer: Big chunk once a month

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March 8th, 2015, 5:01 pm

Nidoqueen C. (Guest)

Nooo...

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Oh hell no, this cannot happen XD

If even one of them died I will curl in a corner and cry, if jojjo died I will do so for until I go back to the start to see her again ;-; if cogito dies I will cry myself to sleep XD

I love this nuzlocke very much and it has caught my attention 10% more with each update, thanks for being so patient with us all XD

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March 9th, 2015, 4:47 pm

puckles (Guest)

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is puck alive?

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March 10th, 2015, 2:08 am

Roler42 (Guest)

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I'm surprised Robin isn't mentally scarred with PTSD after all that's happened to her by now x.x

I'm actually tearing up at the idea of the entire team being dead... you really know how to write a good story to make me attached to these characters

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March 10th, 2015, 4:46 pm

Guest

NO

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DID KATO SURVIVE? TELL ME KATO SURVIVED. GAHH, CLIFFHANGER IS KILLING ME! I WANNA SEE WHO SURVIVED. D:

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March 10th, 2015, 9:08 pm

Jako Valnak (Guest)

WHAY

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@Qlock: YOUVE MADE ME CRY SO DANG MUCH, AT THIS MOMENT, I WANTED TO THROW MY PHONE ACROSS THE ROOM.

... Got that out.

Ok, I want their move sets. I'm making them all in a team, and I'll roleplay, battle, and do plenty more (Kweh~, I mean the Amie.) with this damned team. Jojo... Of my god, Jojo...

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March 11th, 2015, 3:32 pm

Crispy_Chen

Superb!

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I came across this comic about a year ago, and since then I´ve been dedicated and following it.

This is the first nuzlocke comic that I ever read, and it introduced me to the whole idea of nuzlocking. And even now, when I know what nuzlocke is, this comic still manages to create so much tension and surprise me. No other nuzlocke comic ever did that (from the ones that I´ve read of course).

I will just say: the storytelling is superb. It easily made me attached to all the characters and I always feel terrible when something bad happens to them. I was literary shaking while going through those last few pages, anticipating a horrible outcome for Robin´s team.

As much as I don´t want anyone of them to die, I have a feeling that Jojjo and Swan won´t make it, with Zager and Pluto filling their spots. I can´t even imagine what s**tstorm is going to be when everyone finds out that Pluto is a new team member.

Robin´s sanity is very questionable after all of this.

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March 13th, 2015, 2:06 pm

Guest

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Absolutely awesome

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March 14th, 2015, 9:54 am

Almeida

AMAZING

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My god *-*
what a plot!!!

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March 15th, 2015, 12:15 am

HealerKira (Guest)

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Is that the last page for now, or... It's so good. I've never really paid attention to comics like this but this one's really pulled me.

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March 15th, 2015, 12:28 pm

kk (Guest)

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If you released this as a book when you're all finished, I would buy it in a heartbeat

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March 16th, 2015, 2:19 am

Absolol

All aboard the feels train!

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EVEN MY FEELINGS ARE FEELING THE FEELS I AM FEELING RIGHT NOW!!! D:<

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March 16th, 2015, 7:33 am

erico (Guest)

Super

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I had to pop in to state you are doing an excellent work here, congrats!

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March 16th, 2015, 7:53 pm

Draexzhan (Guest)

My prediction...

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I'm almost 100% positive Cogito survived. Puck *may* have survived, but if he didn't, he's dying, not dead. Bimm is rather dubious. I'd like to think she survived, but I kind of doubt it. Swann... I hate to say it, is probably dead. And Kato... Oh god, I don't think he survived, but MAN do I hope I'm wrong about that. Anyways, uh... If suspense could stab people, I think you'd be charged with genocide right about now.

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March 17th, 2015, 9:03 pm

Phil (Guest)

Wow...

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I just went through this entire comic, and have loved every second of it. This better not be the end here, I swear I'll go insane!

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March 18th, 2015, 2:30 pm

Philipo (Guest)

Team..

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Please tell, Kato and other Robin's Pokemon survived.................................................................................. ................................................ but I don't think Kato survived this fight D:

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March 19th, 2015, 2:19 pm

disastermaster

well duck

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...

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March 19th, 2015, 9:59 pm

PPPchairman

WOW

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I just discovered this comic yesterday and have been reading it on my phone from the beginning till now. I have to say this is one of the most entertaining works I have read in a long time. I can't wait for you to upload more of Robin's adventures.

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March 20th, 2015, 12:05 am

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

AMAZING

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This could very well be the best nuzlockes I've ever seen. Not only is your art INCREDIBLE, your story is amazing. I mean, in the nuzlocke my friend and I are creating, I write, he does pictures. And although it PAINS me to admit this, your story tops mine by a mile. Not only do you have me learning to love your characters, I actually CRIED during this battle. AMAZING.

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March 20th, 2015, 12:08 am

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

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Definitely Dead:
Swann.
Might be dead:
Puck
Bimm
Kato
I don't think so:
Cogito
JoJo

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March 25th, 2015, 7:05 pm

Guest

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@NuzlockeWriter: YOU SHOULD PUT KATO WITH SWANN

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March 21st, 2015, 3:41 am

Christy Weavile

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UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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March 24th, 2015, 12:34 am

Jako Valnak (Guest)

Life

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Guys, one DEFINATELY lived. Kato would have shit tons of defense, so he is most likely ok. Bimm... Not sure. Puck is probably alive, due to his balk coming on. Cogito is poison type and took an EQ, so 2x damage. But, she is also BALK. Jojo actually would have some Def, so it's possible, but same case as Cogito... Swann is in a strange boat, and said a wonderful poem... But, it seems like it's his death bed's poem that he wrote... That's all I got...

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March 24th, 2015, 11:35 pm

SoulIke (Guest)

Man...

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Kato has high defense so I believe he'll be fine. Puck took some hard hits, his shell was cracked and was unconscious, so he took the full blunt of that rock slide, it looks bleak for him. Bimm didn't take any hits except for that one head slam that knocked her out, I believe she's fine. Cogito was awake during the rock slide so she could somewhat defend herself from it, plus dying from a rock slide just seems out of character for her. Swann is likely dead, as the author gave him an epic poem about death just before the impact, a final memento for us to remember him by. And as for Jojjo, it all depends if Swann did something to save her and succeed, so that's up in clouds.

I love all of these characters and I hope that no one died. Just make some of them incapacitated so Robin would switch them out, but still leave them in the group to interact with everyone else. Atleast that's what I hope for. :'(

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March 25th, 2015, 7:01 pm

Guest

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hurry up and make more things

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March 25th, 2015, 7:03 pm

Guest

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the last time i was here on march 5. and you still havent made more pages

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March 27th, 2015, 1:26 pm

Magpyro (Guest)

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@Guest: They come out once a month. Being rude about it won't speed anything up, it'll just make you look like an entitled idiot.

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March 27th, 2015, 10:46 am

Caolho (Guest)

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O dammit, I will die if I have to wait

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March 30th, 2015, 6:52 am

Flibbersminkens (Guest)

KATO!!!!!

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I kinda just went into shock, curled up into a ball, fell off my chair, tried not to cry, then flooded my house

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March 31st, 2015, 8:19 am

Derp (Guest)

We know SOME

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@Qlock: Someone would have had of survived for you to catch it.

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April 1st, 2015, 2:02 am

Anne Onomus (Guest)

Mother of god Girl

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Wow. You've improved your style so much since you started. I love it! The lines, the expressions, the COLORS! Mother of Arceus!! I haven't gush like this since the last time I had the stomach flu(Vomit joke? O_O)

Also....WHO IS ALIVE!? Swan must have died... Puck can't be dead. Hmm. Poor, poor Robin.

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April 1st, 2015, 4:30 pm

Anonymous (Guest)

Why?

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Oh god, please tell me they are alive. Puck needs to evolve

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April 2nd, 2015, 1:12 am

victinistar

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I just binged the hell outta this comic. And in a few hours am already this far. I love it ;-;

And I can't even tell who died just now.

Thank you for the sheer awesome that this comic is though. :>

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April 2nd, 2015, 11:14 pm

SouLIke (Guest)

Pls update soon.

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Final exams are coming up in college, I hope he updates soon cause we wont get another one for a while until his finals are done.

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April 3rd, 2015, 5:21 pm

a (Guest)

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Update, please.

WE NEED IT

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April 5th, 2015, 7:12 pm

Anônimo (Guest)

Love

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Read this comic 5 times since I discovered it. Still waiting for new updates :D

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April 5th, 2015, 9:16 pm

JRobsonSF (Guest)

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PLEASE HURRY! ALLOW US COUNT THE BODIES, BURY OUR DEAD AND WEEP FOR THEM!!

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April 6th, 2015, 6:18 pm

Braydon Carroll (Guest)

Not Kato!

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Well judging by robins face and kato being in his ball things aren't looking good for kato.i am hoping puck made it the refrence to the beginning of the comic of him always calling her master was cute.

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April 6th, 2015, 8:56 pm

DeathDragon (Guest)

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Holy crap, a ton of people commented.
For some reason I feel that Kato will be fine, y'all. Also, if you can't beat 'em, force them to join.
And man, this comic is living up to it's title.
(Edit) now that I look at it again... I'm not sure Kato's alive

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April 6th, 2015, 9:58 pm

Braydon Carroll (Guest)

Reply..

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@DeathDragon: See its th face and the poke all that makes me worried!

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April 6th, 2015, 11:09 pm

Guest

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WILL YOU UPDATE THE GODDAMN COMIC?! ITS BEEN OVER A MONTH!
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!

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April 7th, 2015, 4:17 am

Abderos (Guest)

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@Guest: Calm your ass down mister, he has no obligation to make any ever again if he wanted too. He's not getting paid for this, this is a side project. Unless you wanna pay him to make comics for you, you'll sit your pretty little ass back down and wait.

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April 7th, 2015, 7:18 am

Guest

Don't be obnoxious.

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@Guest: You don't have to wait if you don't want to, and by that I mean don't continue reading. Nobody is obligated to make entertainment for you or to release updates at your pace. If enough people as obnoxious as you comment here the comic will likely be discontinued.

Edit: This is related https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYQOId373bY&ab_channel=PBSGame/Show

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April 9th, 2015, 2:50 pm

The Missingno. Master

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@Guest: Dude, relax. We all want him to update, but doing this ain't gonna speed things up.

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April 15th, 2015, 3:30 am

Jen Erics (Guest)

Please grow up...

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@Guest: If not, then kindly fuck off!!! :D

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April 7th, 2015, 5:17 pm

Dust the lucario (Guest)

._.

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Please tell me the gang is okay, Please;-;

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April 9th, 2015, 2:55 pm

The Missingno. Master

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@Dust the lucario: Well, at least one of them has to be alive, or else Pluto couldn't have been caught, right? I'm just hoping it's a lot more than just one... It looks pretty grim for Bimm and Swann, though I can't say for sure about the others. Kato was the last one attacking Pluto before the Great Ball was thrown, so I think he might be OK. And as for Cogito, well, I've used Nidoqueen myself in Nuzlockes, so I know they're capable of taking hits, so it's possible she's OK, too. I don't even want to consider the idea that Puck might have died... and I think Jojo might be dead, though I really hope I'm wrong about that.

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April 9th, 2015, 2:42 am

Notkoc (Guest)

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Aw come on : C

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April 9th, 2015, 8:23 pm

GRG (Guest)

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*crosses fingers and hopes for an update tomorrow*

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April 12th, 2015, 3:07 am

Marcolino (Guest)

Sincerely?

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I hope most of them are dead, really. The more deathes the better, mwhuehuahuahau!!!!

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April 12th, 2015, 8:05 pm

tylion (Guest)

...

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....................well............ That was intense. I hope that they all survived, but that seems kind of unlikely.......... Oh well!

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April 15th, 2015, 12:45 am

Bluskale (Guest)

Incredible

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Congrats on 500! I've been reading for a long time and always look forward to your updates. My wife, who has competed in watercolor competitions, thinks your art is beautiful-- I agree! Thanks for sharing.

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April 15th, 2015, 6:11 pm

Le Bawz Man (Guest)

Need Advice!

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Can anyone give me tips on how to make a Nuzlocke comic? I'm currently doing an X Nuzlocke. Also, to the artist, your work is amazing. Don't change a thing. Thanks!

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April 16th, 2015, 4:56 am

SouLIke (Guest)

Go for it

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@LE BAWZ MAN
Copy everything that Qlock does XD, jk.

Here are a few basics that you should consider.

1. Have your art be appealing and make sure it portrays what you want your audience to learn and feel from the section.

2. Make your main character interesting. Find a personality to fit the character you want to create, along with morals and ideals. Also, include challenges in your story events that challenges these morals, ideals and personality, this is an excellent way to develop your character.

3. Include character development. The main character should have a lot of development to adjust to the situations presented to him/her to make your comic more exciting and to make your readers want to keep reading, basically start your main imperfect, and build them as you go along. Apply this to your other characters as well, Qlock does this very well with his cast. Here are some examples:
Robin: Has slight development, the time hasn't come yet for any major changes to her.
Puck: Is becoming more hardened and scared as he fights, you can see this as he repeated"He is young, he will learn." to the eevee that he learned from the old ratatta, who said the same to Puck.
Cogito: Values friendship more.
Kato: Becoming a fighter, from the previous wimp that he was.
DickHead McFuckFace(Rival): Shows a different side of himself during the inside of lavender town cathedral by giving a candle offering(i think) for his deceased parents and raticate. We all know he's an asshole but maybe he has a sweet side =O.

4. Let your Pokemon talk. Giving them speech allows for improving personality through action and words, rather than just actions like what a silent character does. It gives you more options to improve their development.

5. Don't copy EVERYTHING from the game. The Nuzlock takes inspiration from the world and events of the Pokemon game you base it off, HOWEVER, your comic should be YOUR OWN story, YOUR OWN plot, and YOUR OWN characters. Make these things original and just play it out how you want it to.

These are just some things I feel are commonsense but more detailed so help more with your story. Good Luck!

Holy shit, looking at this, I wrote too much XD. That's what college English does to you.

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April 19th, 2015, 5:24 pm

anon (Guest)

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@Qlock: Do you have an idea of when the next update will be?

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April 22nd, 2015, 6:36 pm

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April 22nd, 2015, 6:38 pm

YOU SUSK (Guest)

YOU SUCK

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NO ONE LIKES YOUR COMMEKS BECAUSE YOU TAKE TO LONG

YOU STARTED IN 2011

4 YEARS AGO

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April 22nd, 2015, 9:44 pm

Guest

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@Guest

>commeks

That tells me all I need to know.

Need I remind you that this is completely free entertainment? Qlock makes no money from this comic, as it's a hobby. Unless you're paying him/her, you have no right to demand comics just because you binge read all eleven volumes and now expect a steady flow of them. Please, leave.

I've seen many Nuzlocke artists simply quit because people like you rushed them and caused them lots of stress. A monthly/bimonthly update is better than no comics at all, correct?

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April 22nd, 2015, 10:47 pm

SouLIke (Guest)

@ All the Guests

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I do understand the frustration (especially since he left on a huge cliffhanger). But he's in college and it's finals week, which is very stressful. So cut him some slack, school takes priority.

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April 23rd, 2015, 12:54 pm

Civil Guest (Guest)

Do not feed the trolls

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It only encourages them.

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April 25th, 2015, 11:12 pm

ryolat (Guest)

thank you

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Thank you for making this and for keeping up the amazing work. Is there any possibility I could send you a donation or ask a paid commission?

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April 26th, 2015, 8:48 am

Guest

This comic sucks

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I hope nobody takes the time to read this comic because it takes the guy over a month to come out with two pages. Also, it takes up my time and everyone else's waiting. So I hope this comic is discontinued.

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May 16th, 2015, 7:14 am

N (Guest)

Really

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@Guest: Don't understand how you don't get it. Its not like quality watercolor and amazing story line are produced in a day. There are 500 pages of dedication and hard work in this nuzlocke. Qlocke, I understand that finals are happening and those are a big deal. I don't care how long it takes, you are the best artist ive seen. Thank You.

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April 26th, 2015, 4:39 pm

Ser Howland FUCKING Reed (Guest)

Online community is awful

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Seriously everyone here complaining for your free entertainment disgusts me. I see it all the time, on DBM's comic and on TFS YouTube. You guys want quality media? It takes time! Not to mention there is no profit going on for these guys. Y'all fucking suck. All these guys try to share a story with you and you squeal like bitches impatiently. You want to know the pain of waiting? Try reading A Song of Ice and Fire. THEN you can know pain of waiting.

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April 26th, 2015, 5:44 pm

Guest

Really?

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@Ser Howland FUCKING Reed: Really? Game of Thrones? That's your comparison to this?!

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April 26th, 2015, 10:14 pm

GRG (Guest)

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@Ser Howland

Agreed.

I seriously feel bad if the author ever decides to read the comments.

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April 27th, 2015, 3:31 am

Razor (Guest)

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I might be a guest too but maybe you should disable guest comments. You'll get rid of so many of these horrible people complaining about waiting. Take your time. The quality of this comic matters more than how often you update it.

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April 27th, 2015, 4:36 am

Urist (Guest)

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Holy shit guys grow up. We're literally being given an entire story (and an awesome one at that) for free.
Have some fucking patience.

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April 28th, 2015, 3:21 pm

Chim (Guest)

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@Razor

i don't think that disabling the comments is the answer here. Many of us use this space to make compliments about the comic and these for certaint encourage Qlock to continue. My saying about is only this: ignore than, they are irrelevant.

Someone said something about donating and I would like to do it as well, I said something similar about an year ago and I stand my ground, it's only fair. This comic is soo good!

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April 30th, 2015, 8:06 am

Razor (Guest)

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@Chim: I suppose. I do think the support outweighs the complaints but I hate seeing such a wonderful artist getting so much hate.

Also, yes! Donating is something I can definitely get behind!

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April 28th, 2015, 5:50 pm

SunShineUpYours

Holy Fuck

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I read every chapter in the past 24 hours. I can't get over the intensity of this story. Had me up late last night and I couldn't wait to come back to it today.

Qlock, you're a brilliant author and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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April 29th, 2015, 6:31 pm

To Every impatient (Guest)

disrespectful person on here

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I'm going to keep this as civil as I can-
But I can't help but say you are entitled little brats. You act as if everyone has as much free time as you do, in fact these artists will always have more of a life than you do. Why don't you go send a death threat to your favorite authors who take over a year to publish a book? That's the kind of thing you would totally do. Would you rather have something done quickly and half-assed?

I've been checking everyday ever since this page was posted, but I don't whine like a little bitch about it. And this is coming from someone who can't stand waiting in a long line.

And by the way, stop abusing your right, no, PRIVILEGE to anonymity just to be a jerk. You wouldn't have the guts to spew hate with an actual account.

Sorry QLock for adding to the toxicity, but I felt that something needed to be said.

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April 29th, 2015, 11:30 pm

SouLIKe (Guest)

Yup

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@DISRESPECTFUL PERSON ON HERE
I'm with you friend.
Finals are pretty much over(assuming he has his finals this week). So stop bitching and wait a bit more.

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May 2nd, 2015, 11:02 am

El Tavo (Guest)

Oh man...

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I understand those people who are nervous. I mean, what a cliffhanger!
Personally, I would like to see the result of this fight ASAP, but it's better waiting for some more weeks and let QLOCK do a quality work than having some bad stuff.

Great, great story, QLOCK.

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May 3rd, 2015, 5:07 pm

Tamaranck

The Anticipation!

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The anticipation is killing me! Congratulations on 500, too! Been checking nearly every day to see if this fantastic comic has updated. Try not to feel rushed though. If it takes a year to update I'll still be happy it did. A lot of people on here seem to just have entitlement problems... Keep up the awesome work, and good luck on finals!

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May 5th, 2015, 8:12 am

Jorge (Guest)

Amazing

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Amazing work, i enjoy everithing and waiting anxious forma the next page... There is a way to donate for your work? PayPal or something? you deserve it.

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May 6th, 2015, 1:19 pm

Rico (Guest)

One day...

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One day this comic will end and i will be destroyed.

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May 6th, 2015, 9:42 pm

David (Guest)

Great Work

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Very Very Nice Comics you have here. Congratulations on 500.

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May 11th, 2015, 7:59 am

HawkeyeReticle (Guest)

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Oh goshes I ran through this whole comic in two days. It's really, really great and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, especially with Pluto joining the team! The action and the characters always make me want to know what happens next! I've always admired the quirky drawings and the beautiful water colours as I was reading (makes me want to use them myself, even though I know I probably wouldn't be patient enough), along with the way that you portrayed the Pokemon and the rest of the human characters! I feel really connected to them; more so than many other Nuzlocke comics I've read so far. I'm seriously rambling, but great job! Keep it up! ^v^

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May 13th, 2015, 10:31 pm

A Reader (Guest)

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Guy... This nuzlocke comic is amazing. I`ve been following this history since 2013 I guess. And I hope you keep this work to finish this wonderful plot. I want to give you my Thanks for making such amazing nuzlocke. &#128079;&#128079;

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May 15th, 2015, 3:33 pm

guestoor (Guest)

thanks

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Congrats and thanks for the 500th page! Awesome!

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May 16th, 2015, 12:29 am

Flowbra Commander (Guest)

Best ever

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I just discovered your comic today and from beginning to end it was amazing. I couldn't put it down. I hope you continue despite what others may say. Keep up the good work.and if you ever release this in a physical collected edition, sign me up for an autographed copy.

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May 18th, 2015, 7:38 pm

H mun (Guest)

wow

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I found your story very good, and love the watercolors!
congrats

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May 20th, 2015, 4:26 am

Disembob (Guest)

Great read

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I started reading this comic a couple of days ago and I've just caught up. There are times when I forget that this is a Nuzlocke comic and instead I think it's just a regular Pokemon comic.

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May 20th, 2015, 9:49 pm

Galick (Guest)

LOVE this Read

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This has been an awesome 500 pages! I read through all of it a couple times so far and it has gotten me loving Nuzlockes. I REALLY enjoy your art style as well. Keep it up!

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May 21st, 2015, 8:28 am

ChaoticGood (Guest)

LOVE THIS COMIC

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Awesome job, amazing pics, what a real story, make this into a series on tv and would still watch forever. Cant wait for the next update, and the final tally of this fight :) THANK YOU kind Sir

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May 21st, 2015, 9:18 am

Zoë (Guest)

Oh my god

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I just read this all in two days and I can't wait for the next update, this comic is amazing

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May 21st, 2015, 10:53 am

Lexy (Guest)

excellence

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I found this web series through reddit and i'm really glad I stuck around for the ride. In the beginning I thought this was a troll comic with some of the language and facial expressions, but what I thought was a dark joke turned out to be really heartwrenching, excellent job and I love what you've done with the personalities and development. You are incredible.

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May 21st, 2015, 1:42 pm

spazmccoy (Guest)

Well written

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I really enjoyed reading this comic but one thing that lingered in the back of my mind the whole time was: Why didn't Robin ever try to explain that she was innocent? If she had explained she was framed by Gary when Surge was talking to her, I bet he would have listened. But that's just me! I'm not the writer! Again, well written and a lot of fun to read!

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May 23rd, 2015, 9:17 pm

Dark (Guest)

A Thought

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@spazmccoy: That she was framed does not erase the countless deaths she's caused since then. Perhaps she believes she is too far in to be seen as anything but a murderer? Perhaps her faith in people is terribly low, seeing as she was betrayed by her mother (for abandoning her, and sending her out into a world that has shown her further loss).

I think events so far has made Robin mistrust most everyone besides her pokemon, and those who show her great kindness first (Mr. Fuji, iirc. She was rearing to kill him before he made his case and gave her shelter.)

But, Lt. Surge doesn't seem totally unreasonable. I have a feeling that he will be a recurring character, and have more words with Robin later on. Hopefully to some good effect.

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May 26th, 2015, 7:56 pm

Tirty (Guest)

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@Dark: I'm not trying to argue with you or pick a fight, but how many deaths does she actually have on her hands? (there might very well be a few. I don't remember exactly everything that has happened so far)

I do however agree that Surge seemed very reasonable and was her best change at any kind of redemption at the time... until his Raichu got severely injured at the hand (claw?) of one of her Pokémon and might even have lost the sight in an eye as a result of that.

I doubt he would be very reasonable if the two of them ever meet again.

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June 1st, 2015, 7:54 am

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@Tirty: I will concede that my notion that she's caused many deaths was a generalization. I can't quite count what is and isn't her fault, and then what she would truly feel guilt for. Most of my gauging of her current self image came mostly from her dealings with Mr. Fuji. She doesn't seem to care anymore how deeply in trouble she goes, and doesn't seem terribly afraid to kill for the sake of maintaining her and her pokemons' safety.

Though, events such as the SS Anne incident do come to mind at the mentioning of the maiming of Raichu. Anybody who may have been left in the city and on the ship itself would likely lend to her list of casualties.

I see what you mean. Though, in my mind, Surge and his Raichu have dissenting personalities (in the areas of their patience and reasoning), he will likely not take the injury lightly whatsoever.

Still, what will matter is circumstance. My hopes are probably built without solid foundation, but I wish to see some manner of turnaround involving Lt. Surge seeing Robin in a better light, and perhaps taking into account her involvement in dismantling a portion of Giovanni's pokemon trafficking operations.

Though the likelihood of this Nuzlocke story ending in ruin is possible, I've become too attached to Robin and her story to want to see it end badly. I'm sure it is impacting my views.

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June 2nd, 2015, 4:09 am

SouLIke (Guest)

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@Dark: You got some fancy writing there friend.

I would like to add that she has not killed anybody yet(execpt for maybe the SS Anne incident, but we can only assume some people died from that since it never showed anybody dead.) However, she isn't completelly innocent. She has assulted many people before, some of which were not simply self-defense, and shes done a SHIT TON of property damage.

I also believe that she thinks she's in too deep right now for any hope of coming back. Seeing as how she's ready to do just about anything for her and her pokemons safety, such as crashing the SS Anne into the city too help her escape without giving too much of a shit about anything else.

Also based on what Surge said to Adeele on Chapter 7 Page 52, I think he suspects what we all know about Robin, but may be reluctent to help her because of what she did to his Raichu.

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May 21st, 2015, 5:47 pm

Hoping (Guest)

Deaths

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I hope only Swann and Bimm died.

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May 21st, 2015, 10:40 pm

Anonymoose (Guest)

Really?

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Two things. Love the comic. Keep up the good work. I do not mind the wait.

To the guy who thinks four years is a long time to spend telling a story: I don't think you understand the point of a webcomic. There are webcomics that have been going for far longer than 4 years. Kevin and Kell has been goin for a decade. 4 years is not a long time. Do you need links to comics that started in 2000-2003? Or will you just show some restraint in your comments?

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May 22nd, 2015, 10:16 pm

Derpin (Guest)

PooooooL

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(NOTE: this isnt me ii am in charecter.)

Iz Impaytiant i wuv dis komik it kewl aNd pooze ( please ) twy ur hawdest too kuntinu ( srry if u cant understand =)

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May 25th, 2015, 4:12 pm

snig (Guest)

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ooohhhh, the wait hurts :(
but take your time

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May 30th, 2015, 12:45 am

Rompastomp (Guest)

Keep it up!

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Hi there,

Started reading this comic less than a week ago, and blazed through the pages! I really love this webcomic, it's been amazing the entire way so far! Can't wait for the next update, thanks for making such a great webcomic!

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May 30th, 2015, 9:31 pm

asdf (Guest)

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Omg that cliffhanger :S

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November 24th, 2016, 2:52 pm

SecretlyANerd0.1

SecretlyANerd0.1

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Quick, step on him while he's in the great ball

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November 30th, 2016, 10:03 pm

coldplay109 (Guest)

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The only way they could've stopped him...

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