Chapter 11: Page 63

posted June 2nd, 2015, 4:14 pm


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June 2nd, 2015, 4:23 pm

Qlock

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Aaaand this is where we'll leave our heroes for now. Again sorry for the wait (news section explaining why) but here it is. So now is I good time to tell the last details of the battle: Switched in Jojjo to do some damage on the sleeping snorlax. It wakes up and uses Headbutt and Jojjo dies immedeatly. Sends in Swann to try sleep powder again - it misses and the Snorlax kills Swann with its next headbutt. Bimm and Kato were in their reds. I didn't pick up the game again for a week ... So ...

RIP Jojjo Lvl 3 - 29
RIP Swann Lvl 12 - 28

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June 2nd, 2015, 5:03 pm

DeathDragon (Guest)

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Just giving in... It's gone far enough.
Edit: Oh my gosh! First!

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June 2nd, 2015, 5:18 pm

LumpySpacePrince

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Poor Jojjo and Swann! I liked it that you used a Victreebel, it's one of my favorite grass Pokémon. Your poor protagonist got caught (sorry, I forgot her name xD), I wonder what will happen to that poor girl. :(

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June 2nd, 2015, 6:10 pm

EonFive (Guest)

RIP Jojjo

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Poor Jojjo was my favorite character with her caring for the others. She will be missed.

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June 2nd, 2015, 6:51 pm

SchmetterlingGirl

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I'm actually crying a little... this is so awful and sad. Robin, no...

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July 22nd, 2015, 6:11 am

Guest

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@SchmetterlingGirl: dont worry i cried a lot 😂😂

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June 2nd, 2015, 7:11 pm

megamario1392

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omg, so much feelings :'(

Hoped Swan and Jojjo would survive, but days ago i saw you removed them from the team page, that was hell of a signal, You confirmed i with that update.

And I wouldn't thought robin would get arrested D:, but Robin did the right thing by saving her pokemon in the hands of Pucks.

I think we'll have either Cogito goes Berserk and wreak Havoc the prison once she found robin or Surge will be a key character, or even maybe something that Involve pluto.

In any case it was Great, just Epic, Now you leave us with anoher great cliffhanger :,). Well, GREAT CHAPTER Qlock.

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June 2nd, 2015, 7:17 pm

SoraIndigo

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no not Jojjo ;-;

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June 2nd, 2015, 7:21 pm

kilozombie

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This whole part has me reeling... sending Puck off, Robin giving up, Cogito running before stopping herself, and the overall style of the last few panels as they pull out from the scene as she's arrested. Bravo, seriously, this comic is intense. Nothing compares.

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June 2nd, 2015, 9:44 pm

Endulos

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NO NOT JOJJO AND SWANN :(

I love this comic. I wish there were more Pokemon comics like this!

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July 22nd, 2015, 6:13 am

Guest

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@Endulos: i wish the same thing

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June 2nd, 2015, 9:51 pm

troblsomtwins829

OMC I'm crying!!! D,:

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I didn't think pokemon could be so emotional!! Robin please don't get the death penalty, everyone's gonna be so sad!! D:
Puck please be okay.

and Jojjo.... she was my favourite >,:

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June 2nd, 2015, 9:55 pm

The Orange Cow

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That was brutal...

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June 2nd, 2015, 10:24 pm

Tijopi11

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NO, where's my proper goodbye!? Where's the dying words? It burns because they didn't get a good heroic ending like all the other nuzlocke characters. No heroes here, and yet they were heroes even without the words D': Bravo!

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June 4th, 2015, 6:08 am

Jako Valnak (Guest)

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@Tijopi11: Its not goodbye.
Besides, Puck has the others and Robin is just in jail.

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June 2nd, 2015, 10:32 pm

El Tavo (Guest)

Wow.

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Ok, that was sad. Right on the feelings.
I was kind of afraid of what was going to happen on this update but, well, the story goes on.
RIP Jojjo and Swann. We'll miss you.

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June 2nd, 2015, 10:53 pm

Avion (Guest)

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This comic has been quite amazing, and I hope it continues from this point! You make it seem like a final climax, but Robin always gets out of trouble somehow. Maybe she'll be too sweet to arrest for murder.

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June 2nd, 2015, 11:05 pm

ThatOneSpriter

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Holy tits this is so gritty! I'm loving it! Great job as always!!

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June 3rd, 2015, 12:29 am

destin (Guest)

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Found this through reddit in April. Read the whole comic in two days and now I'm checking like every two days for the next panels. It's my first nuzlocke comic and I'm loving every panel. Beautiful work! Keep it up!

PS Swann's death monologue killed me because I just knew both would die. I was sure Puck was dead too, but it was a pleasant surprise he made it. Pluto is gonna get beating for sure!

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June 3rd, 2015, 6:08 am

steelscyther_2008

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I bet they bring in a Psychic pokemon for interrogation and all Robin's been through leaves such a traumatic imprint that the psychic can only describe it as her being 'raped'. And then a APB goes out for Gary Oak and he gets hunted like a dog for a while.

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June 3rd, 2015, 6:53 am

Maxren (Guest)

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It was absolutely worth the wait. I'm awed with what you're making out of the franchise.

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June 3rd, 2015, 7:03 am

Pyrophoricity

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HOW ! how a pokemon story is so full of feelings !!! ah ! so sad !

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June 3rd, 2015, 9:59 am

Datrandomhuest (Guest)

So sad ;(

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@Qlock: I'm crying

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June 3rd, 2015, 10:23 am

Chelvo

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May both rest in peace...
Our protagonist is a complete wreck by now... Thanks to Gary Oak...

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June 3rd, 2015, 11:04 am

Caolho (Guest)

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It's not a reality, JOjo no :(

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June 3rd, 2015, 2:15 pm

JRobsonSF (Guest)

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no man.... just.... no... jojjo should've been deposited months ago.... was it against any nuzlock rule?

I'm not ok...

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June 3rd, 2015, 3:29 pm

MrIHaveASword (Guest)

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@JRobsonSF: It isn't against any sort of rules. Unless you go with optional rules. However, in all truth, I am surprised Jojjo lasted this long due to bug types being the weakest(literally the weakest) type.

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June 3rd, 2015, 4:39 pm

JRobsonSF (Guest)

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Then you let that happen @Qlock ... you let her die :'(

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June 5th, 2015, 8:40 am

The Missingno. Master

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@MrIHaveASword: Beedrill are tough. You'd be surprised. In my own FireRed Nuzlocke, following the horrible and needless deaths of Sheldon the Squirtle and Vlad the Zubat at the hands (magnets?) of some Super Nerd's Magnemite, Lisa the Beedrill single-stingeredly got me through Mt. Moon, with nothing to work with but Poison Sting and Fury Attack, learned Twineedle over Poison Sting, and got me across Nugget Bridge with just those moves. Other Pokémon came and died unreasonably quickly (Kraken the Magikarp, Maggie the Oddish, Scratchy the Meowth, and Flutters the Butterfree), but Lisa outlived them all. Until... Diglett's Cave. I went in there with Lisa, but with Wings the Pidgey, a recent catch, in front, hoping to catch a nice Diglett. First encounter? A friggin' Dugtrio. Wings's Sand Attack did nothing, I may as well have been using Splash for all the good it did. Wings died to Fury Swipes. I sent Lisa out, hoping I could weaken and catch the Dugtrio... No good. Lisa died to a single Dig, ending the Nuzlocke. But were it not for Lisa proving just how tough a Beedrill could be, I never would've made it past Mt. Moon, is my point.

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June 6th, 2015, 9:46 pm

MrIHaveASword (Guest)

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@The Missingno. Master: I did a nuzlocke in it too... I don't remember which one it was. But I had an Arbok. Anywho. I had gotten a caterpie in the forest, and used martha for a while. It wasn't until I needed to sub out some pokemon for others to train did I realize how many times she escaped death... She probably could have died as many times as kenny, but was incredibly lucky.

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June 3rd, 2015, 2:59 pm

melaredblu

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Oh wow, she let them catch her. I wonder what's going to happen now...

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June 3rd, 2015, 10:01 pm

Wulf (Guest)

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I'm glad you didn't show the bodies. That scene with Cogito and Robin was really powerful. TmT They wouldn't just let their human buddy sacrifice herself right? The team's gotta rally together to help her!
And poor Kato, I hope he wakes up, but I'm worried how he's going to react to losing Jojjo... she was always looking out for him and now she's gone.

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June 3rd, 2015, 11:27 pm

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Come on, even if they can't keep fighting alongside the team, surely they're not REALLY dead right? The only one who saw them was Cogito, and she didn't do anything to check for sure they were truly gone... unless it was so gruesome that there was no mistaking it even from a glance. =C

At the VERY least, maybe they'll be back as ghosts or something to stay with the group? We love them too much for them to just be GONE, especially after Swann had such a poetic self-sacrifice moment to try and save Jojjo. Was that truly all for nothing?!

I don't care if I just sound like I'm in denial, Qlock has already taken some liberties for the sake of the story, so we know it doesn't have to be 100% accurate to the original run of the game, right? Please? T_T

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June 8th, 2015, 10:53 pm

JRobson (Guest)

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@Luigifan305: Yeah dude... you are in denial... the gruesome situation said... look at the bottom of the rock that Cogito lifts. Is all gooey green. Chlorophyll and bug viscerae.

This comic is slightly worst than Game of Thrones, cuz here not even the author knows who's gonna die.

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June 3rd, 2015, 11:33 pm

Hardlifelover (Guest)

WHY!!!! :'{

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Ugh the feels!!! I am so happy I waited for this update!!! Please when this is over make another one but take your time like this one! Or write Pokemon comics and sell them, I would buy them all, any price!!!

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June 4th, 2015, 12:45 am

GoldenJoe

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Looks like Giovanni was right. Jojo will be missed, but I'm actually glad to see Swann go. Leaving the state of their corpses to the imagination was a good decision. Cogito's expression tells us all we need to know. Can't wait to see where you take the story from here.

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June 4th, 2015, 6:15 am

Crispy_Chen

Excellent update!

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This was an amazing update from the start to finish!

I already expected that Swann and Jojjo would not make it, but despite that, the scene where their death was revealed is still absolutely stunning! Especially the fact that you did not show their bodies and those lines from Cogito: " We are done". And then when she turned around and revealed that she was crying (for the first time in this comic!) should tell you enough.

And then those last panels where Robin decided to let go of her team to save them and just gave up and surrendered. I can totally understand why she did that. She does not want to bring her team into any more trouble or witness another Pokemon from her team dying. I mean sure, she will probably reunite with them later, but right now she probably thinks that this is the last time that she is seeing Puck and the rest of her team.

And now for Pluto...was he in one of those poke balls that Puck swam away with? If so, there is no telling what Robins team might do to him.

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June 4th, 2015, 4:50 pm

Awesome_Nick (Guest)

I'll miss you...

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Finally happened... "Pokemon meets Game of Thrones."

I didn't care much for Swann, but Jojjo was always one of my favorites in this story. And I do understand that the author's not making anything up on a whim, it's all from what actually happens in the game, and the game can be fair or unfair, especially in the Battle Facilities. Thank God those won't be a part of this...

I always had a small fantasy that, if Mega Evolution would be included in this story (not that it would, but bear with me), then Robin would get a Beedrillite and Jojjo could Mega Evolve into a Mega Beedril that regains her wings every time she Mega Evolves.

But now I have a new idea. I'm going to make a Mega Beedrill of my own and name it Jojjo in her honor. She'll probably die a lot in the Battle Maison, but in that mode you can argue that death (as well as your held items being consumed) is not permanent.

Until then, I'll miss you :(

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June 4th, 2015, 10:25 pm

Guest

what now?

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Hot damn, what a series of scenes. getting captured once again puts the protagonist at the mercy of the authorities, and with no backup things could go terribly...

But I'm curious as to where we are in the game. It's been waaaay too long since I've played this game and dont know what is supposed to happen after snorlax. Was this a transition to obligatory town sequence?

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June 5th, 2015, 12:51 am

Draexzhan (Guest)

This is kind of ironic

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Robin and co. would have been fine up north if they had stayed there. But they chose to go south for the sake of being with Jojjo and Swann... Now both of them are dead. Had they stayed up north, it would have been better for everyone.

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June 5th, 2015, 6:49 am

SouLIke (Guest)

......

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I will miss Jojjo, she was my fav ='(. My only hope is that Cogito was incorrect, that they're barely alive, yet were taken to a hospital by the police and meet with Robin and the others again later. Maybe become something like the HM guys that don't fight, just be there to support the team. But if the author says they are dead then.... ;_;

Thanks for the update and amazing story as always. Looking forward now to the confrontation with Pluto, the possible jail break, and what the eevee will evolve into.

Rest in Piece: Jojjo & Swann

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June 5th, 2015, 8:30 am

The Missingno. Master

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Dammit, Jojjo, no... D:

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June 5th, 2015, 8:33 am

The Missingno. Master

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On another subject, I'll bet anything that the next time we see Puck, he will have become a Blastoise.

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June 5th, 2015, 8:46 am

Sakuka

ARGH MY HEART

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@Qlock: What an update, this is intense!!! I've been on edge waiting and just.... AHHHHH


(seriously wonderful art, story and all. <3)

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June 6th, 2015, 9:23 am

Razor (Guest)

Crying

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All throughout this update I was crying. I'm so glad Kato is alive, he's my favourite character but Jojjo was a close second. I'll miss her motherly personality to the team. TnT

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June 6th, 2015, 5:11 pm

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Just going to say.

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I did like Swann a lot, and am really sad they were both lost. Especially after getting to know them so well! Looking forward to what's next!

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June 6th, 2015, 5:35 pm

Marinta

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How did you get me so attached to them? That's really great story writing - and Robin, that poor girl!
Gosh, I can't wait for this to update soon!

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June 7th, 2015, 10:21 am

Almeida

Omg man

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just fkng amazing
so much passion!!!
im ur fan!

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June 7th, 2015, 3:18 pm

Surgepower (Guest)

Man... This comic is intense...

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This is the best pokemon comic I have ever read and I love every page in it. Really sad that Jojjo and Swan got crushed. I really do hope they survived and hope Cogito was wrong... if not, oh well. Keep up the amazing work cause u have my support Qlock! :)

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June 7th, 2015, 8:03 pm

DragonTrainer

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I'm as sad as if they were real ;_;

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June 7th, 2015, 10:27 pm

Guest

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Sooooo sad! Can't be live Swann is dead. He was too noble! But he was my favorite. But oh my god an uptake finally!

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June 8th, 2015, 11:13 am

Guest

R.I.P

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Rest in Peace Swann and Jojjo. You will never be forgotten...

I'm crying. I actually cried a bit when it revealed that Jojjo and Swann... Died. D:

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June 8th, 2015, 11:17 am

Feruim (Guest)

Worth the wait

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Already told you, this is by far the best,history i've ever read about pokemon,you really have that catchy thing some authors miss so much, keep up with the good work, maybe you should start to think about trying to go to business with some other comic maybe?

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June 8th, 2015, 12:38 pm

Blackwing (Guest)

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I realllly think you should update the character section after every chapter to help people remember who is who and who has died and such

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June 8th, 2015, 6:18 pm

kilozombie

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I saved Jojjo and Swann's character images if they get added to the dead list. Really sad reading their descriptions, looking at their pictures... and knowing they're gone. Damn you Qlock!

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June 9th, 2015, 2:36 pm

Hey (Guest)

Ouch

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........... Ow

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June 9th, 2015, 6:40 pm

Greg (Guest)

Time for a sad status update.

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Quality art style and sad story. Much love.

By the way, now is a good time to update the CHARACTERS page – half the pictures are broken.

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June 10th, 2015, 12:37 pm

X (Guest)

Damn you Garry

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To think that this is all Gary's fault for killing her first Pokemon, Revenge at it's worst. Robin will be fine.

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June 10th, 2015, 2:10 pm

guest (Guest)

Deceased

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Its about time ...... to place two more heroes in the deceased list

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June 10th, 2015, 2:20 pm

Luffy (Guest)

One Piece

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This scene reminds me of Sabody arc , in which kuma blows up all the strawhats , and only dispair remains

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June 10th, 2015, 3:05 pm

Rip the Hunter

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This comic rips at the heartstrings every time I check in on it.

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June 15th, 2015, 1:36 am

Clover_chan

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I'm so thrilled I came across this webcomic. I finished the whole series up to this page all in a day. It's extremely well done. The story, the art, etc.

Poor Jojjo and Swann Q_Q I liked those two. Swann's epic way of talking and Jojjo's kindness and compassion. I also liked how everybody's had to deal with the pain and sorrow of so many deaths.

I'm sorta secretly hoping that Eevee becomes a Svlyeon just to mess with the story xD but I know that isn't possible since this is Kanto Q.Q;;;

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June 15th, 2015, 2:38 pm

jfraz (Guest)

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Love this comic so much. Please sell paperback copies when you finish (in the distant future)

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June 17th, 2015, 8:19 pm

NuzlockeWriter (Guest)

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Nononononononononononono
I can't.... do it. Why Jojo!? Why Swann!? Kill that stupid Snorlax! Why couldn't he have died instead!? I'll.... miss you guys.

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June 20th, 2015, 2:27 pm

shadowmwape

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This is so Fucked Up!
I like it, but hate it.

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June 21st, 2015, 5:21 am

It is a he or she? (Guest)

?

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I thought it was a he not she what the hell are you saying is a male right?

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June 21st, 2015, 5:26 am

The TRUTH (Guest)

Robin is a she

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@It is a he or she?:
Robin is a she even if she looks masculine in the face it says in the characters tab robin is a she, but I understand how you got confused

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June 21st, 2015, 12:34 pm

Alfie (Guest)

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fuuck man that was a ride. I love this series so much. Hope you continue in your own time

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June 22nd, 2015, 4:10 am

hhella

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fuck wow. I've been following this since forever but i just reread it and holy shit. jojjo noo!! and swann too ugh *cries*

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June 29th, 2015, 5:51 pm

Fliplogic

Heart-wrenching

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Qlock,

There have been many nuzlockes that have brought me to tears,
But yours is the only one that has ever given me goosebumps.

The rage-induced fighting in this comic in so feral and brutal, yet so emotionally gripping and relatable (most notably Pucks reaction when Kato was bitten in the neck, and when Jojjo eviscerated that ekans for killing Regina).

This is, without a doubt, my favorite nuzlocke comic, even above Petty's and Ky-nim's (the two comics that I consider to be the quintessential nuzlocke runs)

I tell people to avoid reading this comic if they have just started reading nuzlockes - not because it is violent, but because once you've read this one, you just won't be able to find another nuzlocke that can truly compare.

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June 30th, 2015, 6:44 pm

Guest

So True

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@Fliplogic: This was actually the first Nuzlocke comic I've ever read. I feel empty inside because every other comic I read is never quite as good as this one.

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July 2nd, 2015, 9:20 am

Asanil (Guest)

RIP Jojjo

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This comics is the game of throne of the pokemon universe. just awesome <3

RIP Jojjo She was my favorite characters :(

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July 3rd, 2015, 4:27 pm

LeBawzMan (Guest)

D:

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NOOOOOO JOJJO

OH WHY

WHY

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July 6th, 2015, 9:57 pm

Bealoreas

Oh my!

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First off I have to say... WOW! What a turn of events! A shame about Jojjo and Swann; they fought hard, though. RIP, you two.

P.S.-I love your comic!

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July 7th, 2015, 5:05 pm

Guest (Guest)

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Jojjo was my 2nd favorite character! Swann was also very enjoyable and her poetic personality really brought comedic relief to this intense but nevertheless awesome comic. And is it weird that Cojito is still my favorite character?

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July 7th, 2015, 6:12 pm

MasterDheGamer (Guest)

Amazing work!

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@Qlock: I am truly amazed by this comic. The way you handled the characters is just fenomenal and mature, aside from a beautiful artstyle to complement the story. And to think that this is based on a playthrough of the game, makes me admire it even more. Congratulations, you are an amazing artist and i will wait with anticipation for your next update :)

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July 13th, 2015, 12:17 am

Guest

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This is amazing. So upset I caught up. Just started reading a week ago.

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July 13th, 2015, 11:16 am

Match (Guest)

Ever.

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This is a fucking comic for adults. Based in Pokemon. Now I can rest in peace.Thank you for drawing this excellent story, I could ever imagine a pokemon comic being so serious and catchy. It's like a fusionated version of Manga Pokemon & The Walking Dead. Amazing job.

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July 13th, 2015, 5:48 pm

Calcar5 (Guest)

Holy Crap!

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This comic is so good but depressing; I remember I read the first page, didn't think I would like it but then I was like: what happens next and I got hooked! So thank you for writing a great comic for me and my friends to read. :D

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July 22nd, 2015, 6:09 am

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why jojjo 😢😢

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I loved jojjo soo much why oh why??? &#128546;&#128546;&#128546;&#128546;&#128546;&#128546;

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February 1st, 2016, 2:51 am

nooooooo (Guest)

RIP

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;(

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November 30th, 2016, 10:08 pm

coldplay109 (Guest)

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Man... we lost some good ones :(

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August 16th, 2018, 11:23 pm

ZavienF

Rest In Peace

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Damn, Jojjo, of all of the characters, Jojjo... I know there was nothing you could've done, but damn...

And let us not forget about Swann, your sacrifice and your songs shall not be forgotten.

RIP
Jojjo and Swann
They will be missed.

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