Chapter 12: Page 11

posted July 21st, 2015, 4:10 pm


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July 21st, 2015, 4:10 pm

Qlock

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Aaand here we goooo another chapter! ... I am actually a bit worried how this one's gonna go, like, plotwise and ugh, some subjects and themes that I'm not sure I've handled in a good (or even acceptable) way. But oh well. We'll just have to see.

also - sincere apologies for shitty night scenes. Sorta forgot how to paint them (somewhat), ruined the paper for a few pages before I sorta got the hang of it again. And I need to switch scanner for the day scenes apparently. The one I suually use can't pick up bright colours ... uh ... not much else to say.

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July 21st, 2015, 4:21 pm

Cha_c_San

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I love the watercolour colouring. It looks so fresh. :) :) :)))

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July 21st, 2015, 4:26 pm

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Safari Zone, interesting... But what happened to Robin?

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July 21st, 2015, 4:37 pm

UnfortunatePanda (Guest)

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@Critic: She got arrested at the end of the last chapter

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July 21st, 2015, 10:15 pm

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@UnfortunatePanda:
I know, but I'm just curious about what happened after that. Did she go to jail? Is there going to be a trial? Or did she escape?

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July 21st, 2015, 4:46 pm

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Kato is depressed. Why u got 2 make him sad. That's like the worst thing a human can do.
D*:
(Jk, it's just sad 2 see him sad)
So, is the team going in seperate paths?

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July 21st, 2015, 6:24 pm

MrIHaveASword (Guest)

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Considering that they are going to the safari zone... why am I all of a sudden humming move it?

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July 21st, 2015, 7:04 pm

IomBur

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Oh man, my heart is already breaking.
I'm glad you're back though, so hype.

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July 21st, 2015, 8:28 pm

Guest

YESSS!

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It feels like forever since the last update! Wonder if someone will get captured in the safari zone?

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July 21st, 2015, 8:58 pm

SoraIndigo

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and before both dratini and chansey are caught first try

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July 21st, 2015, 10:50 pm

The Orange Cow

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Excellent update! Thanks!

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July 22nd, 2015, 1:31 am

PercussionFish (Guest)

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And now I feel sad for Pluto. He must not have been aware of his own strength. And now he's going to be tormented with guilt...

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July 27th, 2015, 8:31 pm

Guest (Guest)

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@PercussionFish: I feel sad about kato, jojjo was like a mother to him, she taught him to fight, to be brave, to get over his fears... But now she's dead and Robin is no longer with them... Such a big loss must have destroyed him on the inside he is extremely depressed now. All I hope is that he can find a way to manage all that and get over it but of course, it will take a really long time.

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July 22nd, 2015, 1:37 am

JustinOther (Guest)

Liking this.

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I like the dynamic here, where essentially you really just don't know what to do after such a loss and are training up the pokemon in-game, yet you weave a whole story out of grinding. Fucking amazing, sir. Take all the time you need, this is being done right and most people can't or aren't willing to do that.

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July 22nd, 2015, 5:50 am

Toot (Guest)

Well.

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Aah, the bitter sounds of remorse.
On another note, I don't think you should blame yourself for your work on the pages Qlock, they look amazing. For the whole comic you've done an incredible work with watercolour at bringing the characters to life, the places and their atmosphere, and the scenes into motion.
Good job man. I hope you'll keep going, because what you're doing is amazing.

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July 22nd, 2015, 8:15 am

Razor (Guest)

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Poor guys... But hey, it's the Safari Zone! Any new team mate from here would be an interesting addition.

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July 22nd, 2015, 12:42 pm

X (Guest)

Passing Time.

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I really liked this part of the chapter, what bothers me the most is whats going threw sandslash(Kato)'s mind

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July 22nd, 2015, 3:00 pm

Draexzhan (Guest)

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Oh man, I smell character development!

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July 22nd, 2015, 11:19 pm

That One Dude (Guest)

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*clicks image for next page*
Uh, machine?
*clicks again*
Oh, no, no no no, please, no
*clicks again*
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
On a more serious note, this is an amazing comic, and you're an amazing authoer and writer, QLock :)

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July 23rd, 2015, 1:02 am

Clover_chan

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I love this story Q_Q <3

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July 23rd, 2015, 1:02 pm

Guest

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Love this stuff, keep it up.

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July 24th, 2015, 7:52 am

Eriol (Guest)

Ohh

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Sneaking at night to train? I'd say Umbreon, but this is a FR/LG nuzlocke, isn't it..? :|

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July 24th, 2015, 7:50 pm

Derpus (Guest)

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I've come to really like Zager. I'm glad he's getting built up to maybe be a part of the main team.

Funny how we can go from hating Pluto to sympathizing with him too. Great characterization. Can't wait for more.

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July 27th, 2015, 9:09 pm

Guest (Guest)

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@Derpus: I will never forgive Pluto for what he has done. Kato's depression, death of swann and jojjo, Robin being arrested. And all those things together caused this, the darkest part of this story.

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July 26th, 2015, 9:14 am

Alfie (Guest)

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awh man this series is making me cry. I seriously love everything about it. I hope they manage to survive and find robin somehow

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July 26th, 2015, 11:02 am

L'homme de merde (Guest)

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I just can't believe, when I think that it can't get better, suddenly you bring us such a nice chapter!

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July 27th, 2015, 9:27 am

Andbacil (Guest)

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Another great update, keep on the good work and congratulations for making something so beautiful!

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July 28th, 2015, 4:40 am

turbinefan (Guest)

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I've been coming regularly to your comic since 2012. You are such a creative artist/writer. The plot is as gripping as the characters as the watercolors, and that's more than I would say for many of the published comics/BD out there. It's a beautiful project and I enjoy it so hard. Thanks so much and keep updating with you have time. Kisses from France!

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July 28th, 2015, 7:02 pm

JRobsonSF (Guest)

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Hey @Qlock, have you already passed the rest of the comic to someone you trust? Just cuz, you know, so we all don't get orphanized case you die before posting it all..

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July 28th, 2015, 9:09 pm

Vaalintine (Guest)

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Is it just me, or does the eevee seem like a ticking timebomb of crazy?

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July 29th, 2015, 7:37 am

Diplomat (Guest)

YAY

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I like the way eve says YAY

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July 29th, 2015, 12:54 pm

melthengylf (Guest)

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I just wanted to say that I follow thiscomic, and I think it's excellent. So much feelings!!

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July 29th, 2015, 10:05 pm

Crimsondrop7 (Guest)

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I'd like to see how Robin's doing and if she plans to rebuff any of Gary's ridiculous claims. He's the main reason she'd been forced into her 'criminal' position. I really hope she finally stands up for herself even if it doesn't pan out. Gary needs to pay for his misdirected anger (because honestly that's where all this originated from).

You make Gary seem older than Robin even though he's the same age. I like that you give him character. He's someone I did not originally expect to become more of a 'villain.'

Discovered this comic on another website and I love how it tugs at my heartstrings. I'll checking every now and then to read it on here. Great stuff, bravo, and keep going!

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July 30th, 2015, 5:54 am

SouLIke (Guest)

Nice

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Really interested into what's going to happen next, SO MUCH PLOT!!!!

Also, can they even be caught in the safari zone? They all have a trainer and Pokeball (which they are carrying around with them). Well, I guess its up to author creativity at this point.

Cant wait for next update, love your work! <3

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July 31st, 2015, 8:21 am

Sakuka

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@Qlock: You're doing great, can't wait to see it when you get things figured out with the scanner. This comic is the best <3

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August 1st, 2015, 3:22 am

Kyesi (Guest)

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I wonder action that snorlax would take to redeem himself

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August 1st, 2015, 7:59 am

Guest (Guest)

Wowee c:

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Exciting! This comic is really the definition of suspense and action.

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August 1st, 2015, 3:30 pm

strangefiction

Amazing Comic

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Just found your comic today and read the whole thing, really great work. The artistry and storytelling is top-notch. The beauty of your watercolors introduces such subtle and powerful influences to the mood. You've put such a unique and fun (and dark) spin on the usual Pokemon nuzlocke story, I must say its very gripping. Everyone was together for so long that I definitely felt for the deaths of Jojjo and Swann. Can't wait to read more, crazy solid work!

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August 14th, 2015, 1:10 pm

mutecebu (Guest)

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My word, this is so good. I love all the different sub-plots you've woven in, and the different motives. Snorlax is a great character.

Aaagh this comic is good but hard to read, but *good.*

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