Chapter 12: Page 68

posted November 13th, 2016, 8:52 am


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November 13th, 2016, 8:52 am

Qlock

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Well this took a bit longer than I intended. Then again, I also didn't intend to fall back into depression hell but that sure didn't stop me. 8D But I'll be visiting some friends and family i haven't seen for over a year now so that should give me more energy to work on things. Though not sure how much scanners I'll have available ... Anyway, not sure what else to say here. Not even sure if this scene makes much sense really. But It was a nuzlocke and I did put Pluto on my team so I couldn't really have them kill him ... oh well ...

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June 24th, 2017, 5:30 am

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November 13th, 2016, 10:06 am

Guest

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Poor Kato... He's the most traumatized one in this story because he has a tender and warm heart. What will dare to cure his inner wound? Will he ever understand and forgive the whole nonsense? But it's also an interesting point for me that what kind of character would Kato be.

Again, nice work!

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November 13th, 2016, 12:52 pm

Banana-Protocol (Guest)

^^

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Things become a bit more interesting now !

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November 13th, 2016, 2:47 pm

Prime (Guest)

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I found this comic a few days ago.
I'm glad that you are still working on this amazing story after all those years.

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November 13th, 2016, 3:56 pm

PBDoughboyy (Guest)

Awesome

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It's always a thrill to get that notification saying this comic has been updated with more pages. It's actually one of the few I bother to read on a regular basis. Even though it's based on a play through of a video game, you've managed to keep the plot interesting and the characters engaging. I know it probably couldn't be done because of copyright issues, but if this was published into a physical format, I would totally buy up the entire series. I can't wait for the next update.

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December 2nd, 2016, 4:58 am

Arod (Guest)

Notification

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@PBDoughboyy: how do you get notifications?

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November 13th, 2016, 4:24 pm

George (Guest)

coool

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This comic is amazing so far, from start to now

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November 13th, 2016, 6:37 pm

Turtle (Guest)

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Sorry to hear about the depression. I'm going through a bit of that myself, and its not fun. I understand the feeling of having no motivation to do anything. It's nice to know you have friends and family who help you out with that though :)

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November 14th, 2016, 2:33 am

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@Qlock: Glad to have you back :D

I was curious to see how you'd justify Pluto joining the team, and this was as good a way as any. It makes sense because I can't imagine anyone in the team murdering Pluto in cold blood, not even Kato, who has suffered the most but is inherently too kind to exact revenge.

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November 14th, 2016, 3:39 am

basia122

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Oh my goodness, Zeager's comment made me burst out laughing cause I was really worried about what would happen to Pluto. I'm so relieved and proud of how much the group has grown up since their "kill everything just cause we can" days. It broke my heart that it had to be through such a horrible experience, but I can't believe how simply amazing this scene is by how much it tells about each of the characters and how much they've been through. It really cemented a place in my heart with the older characters, and made me fall in love with little Zaeger and Pluto as well.
Just bravo. This could have been such a complicated scene, but it wasn't. You told everyone's story and it had me hooked till the end. :D

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November 14th, 2016, 1:31 pm

Salamence (Guest)

BURN

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"i've been zapped worse by doorhandles"

That one cracked me up :D

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November 14th, 2016, 8:16 pm

DragonTrainer

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Everytime I come back, I don't feel disappointed.
I love how this is going on.

I hope you feel better about the depression, That is a real crippling thing for artists.

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November 15th, 2016, 11:30 am

Guest

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Y'know I really need to ask this, do you remember all of these parts of your playthrough by memory? Since I imagine the run is over by now, or did you just write down notes about deaths and catches or?..

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November 15th, 2016, 10:18 pm

SnowSylveon

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This is soooo good! I have been crying throughout this. TTuTT

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November 16th, 2016, 2:03 am

I'm here for the comics.

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Holy shit. Pardon my language, but this is the only comic that has genuinely made me cry on multiple occasions (this being one of them). Please keep up the good work. I get excited whenever I see this update.

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November 16th, 2016, 7:17 pm

auloux (Guest)

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all hail the greatest nuzlocke comic and the update that its glorious creator has provided us with!

i love the character development and artwork as usual! i know how hard it must be toiling on page after page! keep on going!

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November 17th, 2016, 6:42 pm

Guest

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As always, just FANTASTIC work.

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November 17th, 2016, 9:24 pm

DarkTL

Such a wonderful tale!

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Hey there! Just finished re-reading the whole comic and I must say, this is one of, if not the best Nuzlocke interpretation comic I've ever read! I know how tiring it is to make these panels, but I really thank you for giving so much effort to keep going with the story. I look forward to your work and wish nothing more than happiness and success in your life and carrier!

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November 18th, 2016, 2:16 pm

Serra (Guest)

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Joy, pain, sadness and despair.
In just a few pages you accomplished making me feel this.
The latter mostly because the new pages were over and I know it'll be a while for the next ones :P
Man, this is so amazing! Thank you for sticking with us, even while working with your personal life. Thank you so much!

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November 24th, 2016, 11:48 pm

Kokiri (Guest)

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I just read this whole comic for the first time in like three-ish days. It's really amazing. You have done such a good job here and you really should be proud. You've gone beyond just a fanart with this in creating something that is more yours than anything else. Mad props, can't wait for more whenever you're able to produce it.

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November 26th, 2016, 3:24 pm

Someone (Guest)

Great job!

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Not really know what to say, just wanted to tell you that I really like your comic and I hope you can recover from depression, I'm struggling with it to so I totally understand.

Have a nice day!

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November 28th, 2016, 6:07 pm

Lash (Guest)

Great!

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Once again, I love the comic and Im very happy to see that you havent abandoned it. Keep it up! :)

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November 30th, 2016, 2:53 pm

Plz (Guest)

:)

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I would love to see Robin again, maybe we can see a bit of her in jail. Idk I would just love it, this comic is great and I would enjoy it anyways

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December 2nd, 2016, 4:26 am

Arod (Guest)

TY!

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I'm so happy I had this bookedmarked and checked back to see this recent update. Day has been made, you are truly talented. Thank you.

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December 5th, 2016, 9:23 am

greatass (Guest)

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thanks for the update. Much appreciated.

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December 8th, 2016, 10:35 am

FunkyBrobym (Guest)

Astounded

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Simply Amazing. I really love and appreciate this comic, all the character development, mental challenges. I can not wait to see where else you take this. I truly appreciate this comic and you for making it.

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December 9th, 2016, 9:35 pm

Antics (Guest)

Holly fuck!

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Dude, i just read every single chapter today, god dammit, it's just amazing, mind blowing, i love your work, please keep it up!!

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December 12th, 2016, 12:16 pm

WolfFurry123

I LOVED IT!!!!!

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When are you gonna update??? OuO

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December 12th, 2016, 12:48 pm

WolfFurry123

All The Feels

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Amused, sad, despaired, joyful, and scared. I felt alll these feelings when reading your comic.

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December 12th, 2016, 10:11 pm

Syra (Guest)

Fantastic

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A friend sent me here and I read the entire thing over the day. It was so very, very good. You have one of the best art styles I've come across and I love the watercolor going on there. It's gorgeous.

Your characters are amazing as well. I shed a few tears for Jojjo and Swann and kept hoping that they would survive. Such a fantastic story and a wonderful read. I adore Cogito so much.

I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next update. I wish you well and the best. Depression is a horrific thing to try to work around when it strikes you particularly bad. It makes you want to do so very, very little.

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December 13th, 2016, 1:20 pm

MaliciousGravy

I should be ashamed of myself

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I forgot about this for so long! I was near tears by this part T_T

Sorry to hear about how your life's been. I'm glad you get to see your family again. You don't owe us anything. ^^

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December 16th, 2016, 1:24 pm

Thunderknight (Guest)

I"M Caught with the feel

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OMG I read this one time through and I'm so much invested in this completion.

As someone who goes through depression, I understand the lack of wanting to do everything done. But you have gather random people around the interwebs to read this amazing adventure, and supports you.

Take care of yourself, and I'll be checking in time to time to see the latest installment of this wonderful webcomic. :D

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December 19th, 2016, 4:19 pm

Troy (Guest)

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Thanks for the update. As always, best pokémon comic on the web :D.

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December 21st, 2016, 1:51 am

Sierra (Guest)

Wow

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I found this comic a couple days ago after moving back in with my family and I gotta say I'm hooked.
I struggle with depression too, so I fully understand having trouble with your art. Just know you have a nice fanbase and take things at your own speed. Your art is amazing regardless. :D Hope you feel better.

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December 22nd, 2016, 7:58 am

SouLIke (Guest)

Glad to be back

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I'm glad to come back after being inactive for so long. Nice to see your still going, stay strong =D

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December 30th, 2016, 4:14 pm

ash (Guest)

Amazing!

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Hi there! I just started reading your comic today. And I finished everything so far. It is REALLY GOOD, although everybody else has probably already mentioned that. I just thought you might want to know, at the beginning, no offense, but I didn't like your drawing as much. But your drawing improves with every single comic. Now, looking upon this latest strip, I can't believe how wonderful your drawing is. The plotline is amazing! I love the story. I have always wanted to make a Nuzlocke comic, but I have never been a comedian. This comic has inspired me though. One day I hope to become as good a drawer as you and make a Nuzlocke comic as well! Thank you, and please keep making these amazing strips.

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January 2nd, 2017, 8:09 am

Andbacil (Guest)

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Congratulations on the last update! I'm glad the story is falling back on it's tracks! And I miss Robin :(


Keep hanging, buddy, we are all here because of your story, but besides that, I'm truly cheering for you! Let's let 2017 be the year where you'll rise, better and stronger! (like Robin, I hope)

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January 14th, 2017, 7:50 pm

Malnox

Please! Continue working on this!

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@Qlock: I only made this account for one reason: to beg and plead that you keep making this comic. That just goes to show how passionately I feel about this. You've left it at a cliffhanger! WHAT THE HELL HAPPENS NEXT? Pardon my language, but please, for the love of all that is holy, no, for the love of all that is in AND ALL THAT ISN'T, PLEASE! KEEP WORKING ON THIS COMIC! This is the best, most dramatic, most suspenseful, most epic comic I have ever read! Hell, just yesterday I got up a full HOUR AND A HALF EARLIER than the rest of my family just to read this comic. Now I've gotten to this point, and I crave more. Please, continue working on the comic! If it's because of things going on in your life, that's fine. If it's because of a lack of ideas, that's fine, too, as I've got a few myself. Here's what you could do:

Have Pluto gradually gain everyone's trust partially by helping out to prove he's on their side and partially by Zager talking to them, but mostly Cotigo. Zager could say something like this: "Look, Pluto and I... we trained on the top of the mountain. If he wanted to escape, he could have. If he wanted to hurt or kill me, he could have done that as well. Hell, he could have just turned me down with training if he wanted to. And he could have done a lot of other things, too. But he didn't. He didn't because that was never his intention. To bring harm to me. To bring harm to Jojjo or Swann. To bring harm to any of us. He is truly sorry for what he did. He thought he was doing the right thing. And we're no different. Cotigo, you thought you were doing the right thing by rescuing those Pokémon at the restaurant. It ended up costing Jojjo her wings. I thought I was doing the right thing by becoming a jolteon, but that clearly didn't end well for Pluto OR Kato. So please, just trust me. I would know the best of any of us. He's on our side." Then, Puck could tell everyone that he knows the general direction they took away Robin in, as he watched it happen, but couldn't do anything about it as he was in the water at the bottom of the cliff. They could find tire tracks, and they could follow them to the prison where Robin's being held. Pluto uses Puck, Kato, Zager, Bimm and Cotigo's pokéballs to get them in the barred window, and uses his own police status to get to the bars and unlock the door. They then make a mad dash for the door, and that's all I've got right now.


P.S. Sorry I made this so long ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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January 19th, 2017, 11:57 am

Gebrael (Guest)

Wow

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I have to say this is one of the best Nuzlockes I have ever read and that is saying something. I binge read the whole thing but I was well aware of the dates on which you uploaded them and I think that it is incredible that you kept it going for so long. I don't know what is going on with you in your life and if whatever it is that you are doing is helping you feel better then I am glad because I saw the darkness in this comic that reflects off of you as a person and honestly I get it and admire you for putting your emotions into this. You have made a fan for life out of me and I look forward to finishing your story. :)

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